Some of my art!!!
- UberCrackPot
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Some of my art!!!
Well, it finally happened. If you want to know what happened, read some of my journals. Anyways, here!:
Oh, and if anyone knows how to remotely link to an avatar so I dont have to leach off of my comp, tell me. I tried to do it like you would an image but i didnt work. Also, if you have any GOOD comments or constructive comments, tell me. If you are going to be a bitch, then go ahead, but I hope you like goats and a girl with pretty eyes in your mail.
Oh, and if anyone knows how to remotely link to an avatar so I dont have to leach off of my comp, tell me. I tried to do it like you would an image but i didnt work. Also, if you have any GOOD comments or constructive comments, tell me. If you are going to be a bitch, then go ahead, but I hope you like goats and a girl with pretty eyes in your mail.
A spoonful of sugar helps the medecine go down...
AND KILL YOU!!!
AND KILL YOU!!!
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- tamashii
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- SSJVegita0609
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Allow me to be helpful:
Overall its quite a nice drawing. It's got some flaws here and there and could be a little more interesting, but its definately NOT bad. First off, it seems you dislike drawing hands. As can be seen by the lack of the right hand and the strange covering of the left one. The right one's fine being covered by the leg, but the left hand could use some work. The clothe is too loose and the knuckles make it look kinda like a plain box. I'd redo it without the covering and draw the actual hand.
Second off, the bg shouldn't be empty. Add something too it, even if its something as simple as a cloud of two, and I gaurentee it'll make the drawing look better. Don't overdo it though, we don't wanna attract attention away from the guy, who is obviously the focus of the pic. If I were you I'd also make the sleeves the same. I like the one on his right arm a lot more than the left. But that's just me. It's your pic so you can do as you wish with it.
All in all I really like what you've done thus far, you've definately got talent. I'd add onto the pic a little more though. I look foreward to seeing more stuff by you. 8.7/10.
Overall its quite a nice drawing. It's got some flaws here and there and could be a little more interesting, but its definately NOT bad. First off, it seems you dislike drawing hands. As can be seen by the lack of the right hand and the strange covering of the left one. The right one's fine being covered by the leg, but the left hand could use some work. The clothe is too loose and the knuckles make it look kinda like a plain box. I'd redo it without the covering and draw the actual hand.
Second off, the bg shouldn't be empty. Add something too it, even if its something as simple as a cloud of two, and I gaurentee it'll make the drawing look better. Don't overdo it though, we don't wanna attract attention away from the guy, who is obviously the focus of the pic. If I were you I'd also make the sleeves the same. I like the one on his right arm a lot more than the left. But that's just me. It's your pic so you can do as you wish with it.
All in all I really like what you've done thus far, you've definately got talent. I'd add onto the pic a little more though. I look foreward to seeing more stuff by you. 8.7/10.
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- HellBlazer
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cool pic 8) post more
CLARAS FORUM IS BACK!!
"It's better to keep your mouth shut and appear stupid than to open it and remove all doubt." - Mark Twain
"It's better to keep your mouth shut and appear stupid than to open it and remove all doubt." - Mark Twain
- UberCrackPot
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I appreciate the input. Just so you know though, that is only the guy from the pic (which was a class project) and there IS a background, I just exlcuded it for the scan. The art is based off the word solitude, and if you saw the WHOLE thing, you'd see why. But you didn't know that, so I want fault you there. As for the hands, I CAN be good at hands at times, but not at the time I drew this. The cover was planned the whole time, as this art is sort of a Cyber-Punk futuristic theme. Plus, none of you have ever met me, so you wouldn't know this (except Kamoc, Roke, and Truest-Chaos) but I always have my arms and hands covered. You will almost NEVER see me without something on my arms to hide them. This is a characteristic that tends to show up in my art. Notall the time, but most of the time. Still, point taken, in future drawings, I will put more attention in the hands and background. Thanx for the input, I plan on posting more too!
P.S.: Just so you know, my new avatar is based on me. Actually, that is what I would look like if I wear animated. So now you all have a basic idea.
P.S.: Just so you know, my new avatar is based on me. Actually, that is what I would look like if I wear animated. So now you all have a basic idea.
A spoonful of sugar helps the medecine go down...
AND KILL YOU!!!
AND KILL YOU!!!
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I know you better than you think i know you.................... You've seen me many a time, and i'm not joking.......actually the last time you saw me was at your own house, and i was with kamoc and truest chaos...UberCrackPot wrote: Plus, none of you have ever met me, so you wouldn't know this (except Kamoc, Roke, and Truest-Chaos)