Please help with Metropolis idea. Please*

[Yok/0]

I was watching Metropolis the other day at my local rental store....Ok so it's Block Buster, but ne way. I rented Metropolis, and thought it was pretty cool since Rintaro directed it and the same people who animated Astroboy, but then again not why i posted this.

I was thinking since Tima was wanted by 3 different parties. By her "Father", The main Kencha or who ever the main character's name was and Brock the kid with the sun glasses and what better to fit this was

Finger Eleven - Slow Chemicle.

At the begining I thought i could start it off before the big guitar solo that I could show the Speach about the Zigguaruat from the begining, and then focus on this part "The wonder of the world is gone" I would show the labatory where Tima was being created being destroyed. Please help if u can!

[Yok/0]

Well Does ne one have a better idea then? or at least tell me what i'm doing wrong?

[Quietlyflyinghome]

I like the sound of it. Metropolis is a crazy anime, the original movie is amazing as well. Damn it, stop ranting. Lol, where do you stand for a theme idea? gonna be a sad situational type song?(assuming being with finger eleven) I like how you got a story board already running in your mind. Hmm, well its overused so you can make up your own mind on it but: Orgy: Fiction is always a good song to do with robots and relations with others situation stuff. Of course im not in your head so I don't know the idea your gonna get arcoss to the audience. I'll think over it myself and keep boucing ideas for yah. I'll dig through what i got and try to suggest something more rare. Good luck man!

[Yok/0]

Well around where the refrain goes at yea, it's pretty much focusing on Tima being chased by 3 diff. guys. But how about this idea in the lyric of Slow chemicle.

"Finding out that i'm more lost than found" (The scene where Tima just is walkin down a road and then Brock just sneaks up behind her after their confersation from earlier, and then use that thing to stun her) u know what i mean?

But what do i use for this lyric

"I strike to burn, and no flame returns"(should i use the scene where Brock makes his last attempt to kill Tima and then shows tima just touchin her gun shot wound) revealing her inner android.

[Quietlyflyinghome]

The suggestions on the lyrics part sound fine by me. Haven't see the anime in a little while so I have to rely on what your saying abou the part. The realization of her being an andriod in that part does sound kick ass for the use of that lyric. the way her hair flows in many parts of the movie you could also toss in as a metaphor to the flames as well, mixing in your ideas. Good hunting to yah man. I'll get back to yah after I finish off some finals. laters