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Kamoc · Post by **Kamoc** » Thu May 22, 2003 4:02 pm

you're refering to an entire group of people and then referencing it with the war and saying that we all think exactly like you do about it? there's a good way to hit the emotional hole-in-one.

oh yeah, i'm fucking spamming.

BOX THE PICKLE.

DO IT.

fyrtenheimer · Post by **fyrtenheimer** » Thu May 22, 2003 4:04 pm

LMAOOOOOO

Fuck, I'm getting off this computer

Savia · Post by **Savia** » Thu May 22, 2003 4:04 pm

Kamoc wrote:you're refering to an entire group of people and then referencing it with the war and saying that we all think exactly like you do about it?

No, I'm not... I'm just saying that the real casualties of war are the innocent. It's been said before, but that doesn't mean it isn't worth saying.

Kamoc · Post by **Kamoc** » Thu May 22, 2003 4:14 pm

so, everyone who fights in a war are aiming for the innocents? and all of said innocents are supposed to be disconnected from the war during that time of crisis?

you're trying to scare people into believing something. by aluding to the 'poppy man' in some obscure reference at the end of your poem you're attacking people by saying that if they don't realize that innocent people get killed during wartime, this strange man will come and correct us. kind of a double punishment, don't you think? i say that if you're going to get any kind of a reaction out of this poem, the poppy-seed man can't represent fear. he has to represent sadness.

oh wait, i'm spamming again. damnit.

STOP MOOCHING GRAVE OF THE FIREFLIES.

HungryCrackPot · Post by **HungryCrackPot** » Thu May 22, 2003 4:19 pm

Kamoc · Post by **Kamoc** » Thu May 22, 2003 4:21 pm

Lone Wolf · Post by **Lone Wolf** » Thu May 22, 2003 4:56 pm

Stop this. All he wanted to do was share his story and allow others to share theirs with him. There's no need to spam and flame him.

I, personally, thought your story was very good. I'd really like to see some others you have made, Savia.

Keep up the good work, no mater what anyone else tells you.

Veldrin · Post by **Veldrin** » Thu May 22, 2003 5:01 pm

Well to be honest I didn't like it. I'm not saying your bad at writing or anything. I just hate stuff pretaining to war and branch off subjects of war. If you have something non war related I would love to read.

EarthCurrent · Post by **EarthCurrent** » Thu May 22, 2003 6:38 pm

Well, the random picture posting was amusing for a brief bit, but I feel there should be at least a few words of narration explaining how they tie in to the overall theme of the thread.

emp|typ|athetic · Post by **emp|typ|athetic** » Thu May 22, 2003 7:56 pm

fyrtenheimer wrote:NO ONE IS INTERESTED IN YOUR SHITTY DRAMA WRITINGS.

LEAVE ME ALONE

that was fucking evil, fyrt.
not cool.