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Kenshin's Atonement

Post by shiftdown » Sun Jun 17, 2007 10:04 pm


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Post by shiftdown » Mon Jun 18, 2007 10:15 pm

aww did i scare everyone off with my other video? D:

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Post by Cornwiggle » Tue Jun 19, 2007 11:27 am

I might check it out....it's just more Samurai X stuff. >_> I guess I still will. Check back here for comments.

Watched: I thought that was....kinda boring. I've seen this AMV many times, and the OVA stuff that just redraws Kenshin just makes me snooze. The synching was pretty slow too, you let stuff run on for long amounts of time, and when the song got fast you still continued to show slow clips....so yeah, and it was almost 5 minutes. I was pretty bored. I would give this 2/5, work on the synching the most I would say.
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Post by Shazzy » Wed Jun 20, 2007 6:33 pm

I hate to criticize a video made "in loving memory," but since I bothered to download and watch it...

For a first video this would have been pretty good, but I was expecting more from a third..


Quality: Pretty bad. Blocky, grainy, black borders on the edges,

Editing: Lots of long scenes. Let me clarify, there is NOTHING wrong with long scenes if the song calls for it, but your choices didn't connect to the song. You used quite a few dialogue scenes--these aren't meaningful sans dialogue. Also, the flow of a music video (unless you're actually recording your own footage for the song) is mostly determined by cuts between scenes. It's pretty unlikely that you'll be able to match up ten continuous seconds of a scene with ten seconds of a song's rhythm.

Other: You knew what story you were telling and established the relationship well. The long scenes weren't so bad after a few minutes, too, and your editing seemed to improve toward the end.

Oh and I'm REALLY curious: did you use the director's cut of Reflection? There were a bunch of freeze frames I did not recognize.
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Post by shiftdown » Thu Jun 21, 2007 12:31 am

Shazzy wrote:I hate to criticize a video made "in loving memory," but since I bothered to download and watch it...

For a first video this would have been pretty good, but I was expecting more from a third..


Quality: Pretty bad. Blocky, grainy, black borders on the edges,

Editing: Lots of long scenes. Let me clarify, there is NOTHING wrong with long scenes if the song calls for it, but your choices didn't connect to the song. You used quite a few dialogue scenes--these aren't meaningful sans dialogue. Also, the flow of a music video (unless you're actually recording your own footage for the song) is mostly determined by cuts between scenes. It's pretty unlikely that you'll be able to match up ten continuous seconds of a scene with ten seconds of a song's rhythm.

Other: You knew what story you were telling and established the relationship well. The long scenes weren't so bad after a few minutes, too, and your editing seemed to improve toward the end.

Oh and I'm REALLY curious: did you use the director's cut of Reflection? There were a bunch of freeze frames I did not recognize.
Thanks for the input XD as for the blockyness, its beyond me how to get rid of it when i compress it to a file size smaller then 200mb o.0 compression is basically beyond me at this point lol i have a higher quality version(non of the blockyness) but its 233mb's. and yea i used the directors cut of reflection :D

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