Passionate Lust [Hentai] Moonlight lady

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Passionate Lust [Hentai] Moonlight lady

Post by EndlessRage2 » Thu Oct 25, 2007 4:00 pm

<a target="_blank"><img src="http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j112/ ... AGE/BG.jpg" border="0" alt="Photo Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket"></a>
Music:Breaking Benjamin
Song:Breath
Footage:Moonlight lady
VideoLink http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=151684
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This Video Is Not Intended For Children You Must Be At Least 18 Years Or Older To Watch This Video
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Well I'll Start Off By Saying That It's Was Interning To Make This Video Now This Is My First Hentai Anime I Seen I Think It's The Best One Ever Made.
The Story To My Video Is Pretty Simple It's A Hardcore Lovestory About This Girl Named Suzuna Who Comes To The House Of Her Half Alive Mother To Marry This Guy She Has Never Met.Before.But She Is Not The Only Girl Around The House A Maid Named Tomomi Who Lives There Falls Deeply In Love With Suzuna But That's Not Enough She Wants To Show Her How Much She Really Loves Her And That Is She The Only One For Her As They Are Doing Suzuna Can't Stop Thinking About Her Future Husband Who She Wants To Marry But Is Uneasy About It. When She Starts Thinking About It More She Makes Up Her Mind When Her Husband Shows Her How He Really Feels About Her That's When Suzuna Tells Tomomi That She Just Wants To Be Friends With Her And Nothing Else.

Special Thanks Goes To:ngsilver For Hosting My Video On His Website

Second Special Thanks Goes To:nevada11 If It's Wasn't For His Dbz Video I Would Had Never Picked This Song

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Ps I'll Upload The Video I Made For Friend's B-day Later To Night

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Post by Kevmaster » Thu Oct 25, 2007 4:22 pm

Moonlight Lady ftw..so Ima get this O.o

//gets

EDIT: To be honest..I didnt like this too much at all ~.~ Especially the horrid effects annoyed me as shit and the horrofying Visual Quality made me wanna cry :'( You had some alright attempts to synch nicely, but most just seemed like a big mess, sry.
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Post by Niwa » Thu Oct 25, 2007 4:32 pm

Looks already good :o
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Post by ngsilver » Thu Oct 25, 2007 8:28 pm

the video needs work. you need more practice. quality is horrible. was ok. your welcome.
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Post by Kevmaster » Fri Oct 26, 2007 8:29 am

<b>EndlessRage2</b>, your Avatar is too big.

Please either <u>remove</u> or <u>resize</u> it and try to follow <b>The Forum Rules</b> from now on.

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Post by Bauzi » Fri Oct 26, 2007 8:45 am

I´m sry that I always forgot to review your vid this week, but let me do it now:

I like the animation you used to blend in the text at the beginning. The word "lust" just could need a slower animation.

The visual quality is bad. It takes a lot of the fun when you watch it. Work on it please. Always use looseless clips (in HuffYUV or Lagarith codec) for editing and only compress them (.wmv, XviD, DivX) at the end for distribution.

Presonaly I think that the effects were not bad. Simpel but good. Some stuff could need a bit finer work and I have to say it again: A good visual quality makes the viewer to enjoy it more.

I give you 3.35/5 for it ;) It´s nice.

To the avatar problem: What the hell? Well ok, but why is there no software limitation? You know... Everytime I upload an ava on a another site and it´s to big, the site tells me and I can´t use it =/
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Post by Kevmaster » Fri Oct 26, 2007 8:54 am

Bauzi wrote:To the avatar problem: What the hell? Well ok, but why is there no software limitation? You know... Everytime I upload an ava on a another site and it´s to big, the site tells me and I can´t use it =/
Off-Site linking.

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Post by Emotive » Fri Oct 26, 2007 8:56 am

Bauzi wrote: To the avatar problem: What the hell? Well ok, but why is there no software limitation? You know... Everytime I upload an ava on a another site and it´s to big, the site tells me and I can´t use it =/
Moar opportunities to ban people?
Kevmasterflashwithcheese wrote:Off-Site linking.
Some forums have an auto-resize thing, even for off-site linking.

Everything's written clearly on the avatar control panel though, so no excuse.
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