Enter the Wired-Serial Experiments Lain amv

CrazedPalmtree · Post by **CrazedPalmtree** » Wed Apr 02, 2008 10:54 pm

My first amv in half a year....I know I have alot of things to work on, but that's why I'm posting here. Any bit of advice you can give is appriciated but please let it be constructive.

OtakuForLife · Post by **OtakuForLife** » Thu Apr 03, 2008 3:23 am

I liked this only a couple of minor things, the father talking was distracting and
lip sync needs a touch of work. Overall it entertained me

Millenium Strife · Post by **Millenium Strife** » Thu Apr 03, 2008 3:33 am

As a lain fan back in the day (I even had the special edition lunchbox DVD set), I thought the concept of the video was pretty good. It's a shame the size was so small though.

Good job over all!

-MS

Bauzi · Post by **Bauzi** » Thu Apr 03, 2008 12:31 pm

Really not bad. This had potential. Flow was often pretty good and enjoyable. I wish you would remake this vid with fixed lip sync, fixed timing (the second half often seamed to be off) and some changes at scenes for a better dynamic.

Anyway... I like it 3.65/5
Please do a remake .-.

NS · Post by NS » Thu Apr 03, 2008 9:50 pm

I approve of this, and 70% of my approval is due to my name being mentioned

CrackTheSky · Post by **CrackTheSky** » Thu Apr 03, 2008 10:22 pm

That was a very cool video, but yeah, the quality sucked and the resolution definitely should have been higher. I liked the scene selection, the flow, the concept (though it wasn't very much different from most other Lain videos on the .org)...you coulda fixed some of the mouth flap, however.

Good job though, that was definitely worth the download.

4/5

VRSaskayzx · Post by **VRSaskayzx** » Fri Apr 04, 2008 1:08 am

really nice, only complain i have is the quality was bad, other than that it was pretty nice.

Kevmaster · Post by **Kevmaster** » Sun Apr 06, 2008 9:56 am

oh come on..could have had at least a bigger frame size.

CrazedPalmtree · Post by **CrazedPalmtree** » Sun Apr 06, 2008 10:41 pm

Thanks for the comments everyone ^^ I'm working on a remake and going to try to get the higher quality option on Roxio to work this time.

Kevmaster wrote:oh come on..could have had at least a bigger frame size.

I'm sorry but I really couldn't, everytime I had a higher frame size Roxio would do weird things with my overlays. I'm working on fixing that problem though.