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shaunohbi
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When you're feeling empty

Post by shaunohbi » Sun Jul 06, 2008 8:39 am



This is my newest AMV, i worked pretty hard on it:) and would appreciate if you watched it and replied back to me on if it was good or how i could improve!



Also if you liked that one you might like the one i made a while ago, its a naruto action but isnt that bad to watch=) any bad points please reply.

Thanks!!

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Infinity Squared
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Post by Infinity Squared » Sun Jul 06, 2008 8:49 am

Hmm... just to list down all that's wrong with it...

Interlacing.
Wrong aspect ratio.
Weirdly compressed audio (mpeg layer 3 on a wmv file?), but main wrong thing is that you should have had higher bit rate.
Poor video quality.

Thankfully these are just technical problems, which if you brush up on things you can overcome.

The build up and song-video emotional cohesion was alright. Beat was spot on.

Not sure if all that fancy-smanshy effects were all that necessary. It's also so short, that I failed to see the point, mainly cos it stopped when I sort of got interested. Hmm... I'm all over the shop tonight with commenting... oh well, I'll just say I'll give this a 2/10 at best.
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Post by shaunohbi » Sun Jul 06, 2008 9:02 am

thanks ill get on it!
but 2/10? isnt that a bit harsh:P
yer the reason why its so short is i limited myself to 1 day to make it... kinda stupid but i guess ill work on that too
thanks!

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