Ok...I know this isn't a recently made AMV. But I would really like to hear some more professional opinions to improve myself.
So don't hold you back.
Fallout
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Re: Fallout
what I liked in your AMV (Pros):
The usual AMV idea-bombs and serious side from sír buddy
Probably the best Hungarian drama-serious AMV in 2008. Idea is not overused ( not much serious war -centered AMV exists), atmosphere is enough serious to make you think about the cruelness and humanless war as phenomenon. Storyline over the concept is nice, detailed and well-built. So atmosphere and inner content (or we can say message ) of your AMV is 10/10 for me.
What was not so nice in the AMV (contras):
- masks are not enough precise
- at the Aircraft crash scene the plane's motion was not enough smooth
- overall video quality was a little bit weak despite of X264 MP4, probably due to convert or RAW problems
- that history book scene idea is really good but the effect there was lame ( use AE
)
- in the intro, the shadow of the Jin-Roh soldiers was also weird (again weakness of Vegas )
Overall, I give you 8,5 /10 because I know (despite of the mentioned mistakes where most of them would be fixed nicely with AE ) that you put a lot of effort into it and stepped on a path which can be your unique style.
And as you promised, we will impatiently waiting for your next - hopefully your first AE composited - AMV.
The usual AMV idea-bombs and serious side from sír buddy
Probably the best Hungarian drama-serious AMV in 2008. Idea is not overused ( not much serious war -centered AMV exists), atmosphere is enough serious to make you think about the cruelness and humanless war as phenomenon. Storyline over the concept is nice, detailed and well-built. So atmosphere and inner content (or we can say message ) of your AMV is 10/10 for me.What was not so nice in the AMV (contras):
- masks are not enough precise
- at the Aircraft crash scene the plane's motion was not enough smooth
- overall video quality was a little bit weak despite of X264 MP4, probably due to convert or RAW problems
- that history book scene idea is really good but the effect there was lame ( use AE
)- in the intro, the shadow of the Jin-Roh soldiers was also weird (again weakness of Vegas )
Overall, I give you 8,5 /10 because I know (despite of the mentioned mistakes where most of them would be fixed nicely with AE ) that you put a lot of effort into it and stepped on a path which can be your unique style.
And as you promised, we will impatiently waiting for your next - hopefully your first AE composited - AMV.
