Pain // Drama
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- Msf
- Joined: Sat Aug 09, 2008 8:16 pm
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Pain // Drama
Video: Pain
Category: Drama , Sentimental, Horror , Serious
Anime: Scholl Days // Elfen Lied // Afro Samurai // FullMetal Alchemist // Rurouni kenshin
Song: The Worlds Forgotten - The Words Forbidden
Artist: Sonata Arctica
Creator:Msf
plz comment
- surfsama
- Joined: Tue May 01, 2007 2:35 pm
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- Location: California
Re: Pain // Drama
Good amv. The beat-sync is very good and you switch-up the scenes and animes enough that it stays interesting and not repetitive. Good use of basic effects. It's nice to see Afro Samurai gets some airtime.
Two critiques:
1) The intro and outro credits seem...too much for this amv. Especially what appears to be a two-part intro that I misstook for the start of your amv.
2) The video quality needs some polish. The transitions from video source to images was obvious and there's visible interlacing.
Two critiques:
1) The intro and outro credits seem...too much for this amv. Especially what appears to be a two-part intro that I misstook for the start of your amv.
2) The video quality needs some polish. The transitions from video source to images was obvious and there's visible interlacing.
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- Msf
- Joined: Sat Aug 09, 2008 8:16 pm
- Location: Brazil
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Re: Pain // Drama
surfsama wrote:Good amv. The beat-sync is very good and you switch-up the scenes and animes enough that it stays interesting and not repetitive. Good use of basic effects. It's nice to see Afro Samurai gets some airtime.
Two critiques:
1) The intro and outro credits seem...too much for this amv. Especially what appears to be a two-part intro that I misstook for the start of your amv.
2) The video quality needs some polish. The transitions from video source to images was obvious and there's visible interlacing.
Ok surfsama thz for ur coment =D , thx for critiques , i´ll try change in my next´s amv´s
- Msf
- Joined: Sat Aug 09, 2008 8:16 pm
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- blaku92
- Joined: Mon Feb 07, 2005 11:27 pm
- Location: Los Angeles, CA
Re: Pain // Drama
Ok, since you asked . You seem to have an understanding of how to apply effects, but sometimes I felt like you didn't have much of a reason for adding them. This is subjective, but I think you would benefit from using less effects and having more action synch. Using manga was a good idea, but it was all too fast and blurry -- space it out with a longer pauses. Also the Interlaced footage was bothersome. I definitely think you have creative potential. Keep at it! hope this helps.
2.5/5
2.5/5
- Msf
- Joined: Sat Aug 09, 2008 8:16 pm
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Re: Pain // Drama
Thz for "...you have creative potential..."
blaku92 wrote:Ok, since you asked . You seem to have an understanding of how to apply effects, but sometimes I felt like you didn't have much of a reason for adding them. This is subjective, but I think you would benefit from using less effects and having more action synch. Using manga was a good idea, but it was all too fast and blurry -- space it out with a longer pauses. Also the Interlaced footage was bothersome. I definitely think you have creative potential. Keep at it! hope this helps.
2.5/5
- Msf
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