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razzmatazz

Post by qyll » Thu Jun 18, 2009 11:43 pm

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There might be some manga in this video too. I'm not sure. Find out for yourself.
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Re: razzmatazz

Post by Chiikaboom » Thu Jun 18, 2009 11:54 pm

that was awesome.

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Re: razzmatazz

Post by Niotex » Fri Jun 19, 2009 12:04 am

It didn't seem as planned out as your other videos. And while I don't like comparing video's to previous works I can't help it. Your sequences just seem a lot more random and your visual style doesn't seem to mesh it together as well as I might have liked. The main thing that bugged me however was the typography as it seems to be all over the place as well. And considering you rely on it as much as you do in this video its a definite weak point.

The video is still very enjoyable but it just feels like its falling short of being great.
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Re: razzmatazz

Post by *inverse* » Fri Jun 19, 2009 12:45 am

Aw, this was too fun. I actually really liked that colourful, bouncy text, and the manga shots looked great.

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Re: razzmatazz

Post by Brad » Fri Jun 19, 2009 1:41 am

I really enjoyed it. For one I'm a sucker for a good School Rumble video. Secondly, really nice song. Glad to see Wilco get some love. The motion graphics worked very well. I will say that I thought several of the font choices didn't mix well for me, but overall, I really liked it :) Well done.
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Re: razzmatazz

Post by Ingow » Fri Jun 19, 2009 4:53 am

Lovely concept, really enjoyable video. I don't see anything wrong with the typography, yea some of the fonts didn't mix too well but on the other hand they were integrated so well into the video itself with all the character and manga cutouts and special effects that it didn't really make any difference for me.

So yea, thumbs up. :up:
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Re: razzmatazz

Post by Fuck-Nyala » Fri Jun 19, 2009 5:12 am

I don't often see AMV so cool on School Rumble =)
There is only a song which I like less, your work is very good.
I really love, as usual :D

4/5 ! :up:
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Re: razzmatazz

Post by Niwa » Fri Jun 19, 2009 6:07 am

About time somehow made a School Rumble video :)

I really liked the idea and how well everything is placed, but the design was somehow a bit rough here and there. My advice would be to stick with one or two fonts and use a single background. I wished aswell that you could've used more of the manga sequence but it's not a big deal.

Overall I enjoyed it :up:


+ Fun, Composition, Manga Sequence

- Font, Background, Masking
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Re: razzmatazz

Post by Kosmit » Fri Jun 19, 2009 6:49 am

Cool stuff. We need more quality School Rumble vids. I'll be keeping this. :up:

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Re: razzmatazz

Post by dreamawake » Fri Jun 19, 2009 4:09 pm

Fuck how'd I miss a new Qyll video?

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