My 10th AMV ( Hellsing OVA & Kurozuka )

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My 10th AMV ( Hellsing OVA & Kurozuka )

Post by SlayerTwaalf » Fri Oct 09, 2009 8:27 am



Used Vegas 8 and Boris FX 9.2

enjoy!

\m/ \m/

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Re: My 10th AMV ( Hellsing OVA & Kurozuka )

Post by Kireblue » Fri Oct 09, 2009 6:38 pm

I'll start off by saying that the song's intro was too long. I think that you should have stopped the into at about 20 seconds into the video, and cut out the rest. By the time the intro ended at 1:20, I had already formulated a opinion about the video.

After the intro, I really couldn't tell what was going on. Everything was sped up, and all the clips seemed to be completely random. I've never watched Hellsing or Kurozuka, so I truly was lost while watching your amv. I feel that it is very important for AMVs to be understandable to people that haven't seen the series that were used.

I think that the best way you could have improved this amv was to give it some kind of theme or concept. I love Drama AMVs, so I'll admit that I'm sometimes biased towards videos without plot, but your amv just seemed to be too random for me.

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Re: My 10th AMV ( Hellsing OVA & Kurozuka )

Post by SlayerTwaalf » Sat Oct 10, 2009 3:17 am

Thx for the constructive criticism. I wasn't really aiming at creating a story, but I can understand why it adds a extra dimension. Will keep it in mind when a create another fast video like this one. Halfway through this Video I got interested in another song and anime and kinda hurried this project along.

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