One Piece - Fighting - Yellowcard - My second AMV

[hackhaseo]

Here's my second amv, plz tell me what do you think about it, and what i can improve to be a better amv maker

[jubjub2]

I watched the preview of your other video in advance, so I noticed that you have improved since the first one. Glad you took out the subtitles on this one.

Overall, I'd say you first need to work on the pace of the video in relation to the audio. The song was fast paced, but you used so many slow scenes, it felt out of place. Use the music for your scene change/internal synch cues.

Also, random action scenes + fast music isn't always a winning combination. Instead of using only one segment of a fight for 1/3 of the video, try shortening your clips, and use more scenes (we all know Luffy doesn't only fight 2 badly-costumed characters...). I know it's easier, and you release your video sooner, but putting in some more time and effort will really benefit the final result.

In all, it's not bad for a second video, and I can tell that you take the advice you get and use it. Keep it up!

[hackhaseo]

let me see if i understanded well, you say i need to use fighting escenes of various fights instead of 2 only and try to sync the music with the video in terms of "speed". right? tell me if im wrong( sry for the bad english)

[MasamiHirota]

Hi =)

For you second video it's ok, but I think jubjub2 is right. The music is so fast and many scenes are to slow. You have to work more with the rhythm. : )