Hi, I have just upload my new amv. Feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.
Live For The Kill
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Re: Live For The Kill
no. freakin. way.Anime: Berserk
Artist: Amon Amarth
/gets
EDIT: I quite liked it. It's not every day that you see a vid like this pop up
You kept good pace with the mood of the music, and I could tell you paid attention to the main shifts all the way through, which is always a good thing. Some great lyric sync [like at 00:30], and I really got into the second half. That was awesome. Period.
Now personally, I like the fast parts to be a little faster [like the solo at 1:50]. Don't get me wrong... you handled it quite well because it still flowed with the music, so I don't want to get too picky. Perhaps scenes with a bit more motion would work better.
The quality wasn't half bad [but could have been better] and the way you used effects was hmm...effective lol [especially the blurs at the end]
Anyways keep it up
I like what I'm seeing.
~Phan
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Re: Live For The Kill
Thanks for the reply, I enjoyed your comment ^^
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Re: Live For The Kill
:49 secs with just the crossbow, that scene is too still. even with your flashes and stuff there is really no action happening there.
and you had this a couple times throughout, but otherwise you kept the pace up pretty well. I think it coulda done with a LITTLE less shaking, but other than that solid pure action watch
and you had this a couple times throughout, but otherwise you kept the pace up pretty well. I think it coulda done with a LITTLE less shaking, but other than that solid pure action watch
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Re: Live For The Kill
Thanks NS for your comment ^^, I will try to do better in my next amv