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Holy Turtle
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Pain

Post by Holy Turtle » Mon Jul 12, 2010 4:02 am


(my youtube username is BaconOtaku, which is what it says in the credits)

Anyways this is my first AMV, Constructive criticism welcomed.
Sorry if I posted this incorrectly...

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mindinchaos
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Re: Pain

Post by mindinchaos » Mon Jul 12, 2010 6:40 am

I dont wanna critic too much since this is your first amv as you said,

But I think you should think more of what you want to do before edit, I mean creativity is what you need. Yes, the music fits perfectly the character as the scenes but is nothing new and dont grab the attention of whi is watching. Anyway I saw you have some skills so if you still practise and try some new things maybe you will improve more faster than you think ^^
Just one more thing, the font is something already gave from vegas to use? I mean, you shouldnt apply those fonts because dont work on this kind of amvs same for color and stroke.

Nothing more to point,
I only wish you good luck for your future projects
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Holy Turtle
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Re: Pain

Post by Holy Turtle » Mon Jul 12, 2010 12:11 pm

Thank you for the insight. I suppose its going to be difficult to figure out how to something new, but I guess thats for me to figure out. Anyways, you saw right through me, I didn't have any idea of how I wanted to make this before I started.

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