Amv:
Anime: Cowboy Bebeo
Song:Together
Artist:The kin
Editor : Ari Iburuhimu
Program: Sony vegas
New amv - To change your view
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kapparomeo
- Joined: Wed Aug 19, 2009 8:02 pm
- Location: The Green and Pleasant Land
Re: New amv - To change your view
The actual presentation of this AMV is fine - the sepia tone and cine-camera framing complements well the device of moving the subtitles around the page to convey a sense of perplexity and the detachment of wandering, hazy memory, a peep-hole glancing into a world that we still don't quite fully understand. However, it's unfortunately undermined by your rather abrupt ending - simply cutting out without warning doesn't make this video seem like "Episode One" but rather "Part One". An episode is still its own complete, discrete unit - but as it stands it feels like a cutting from something unfinished. At the very least, it needs a fade-out to show that it's coming to an end.
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Ari Iburuhimu
- Joined: Mon Jan 11, 2010 2:45 pm
Re: New amv - To change your view
Thank you for the critique and yes I think your right if it is too be a true episode I think I shall have to end it in a proper fashion not as abruptly as I did I will think this over and hopefully in time re-edit the ending to make it more worthy of the amv its self, again thanks for the help:)