The Iron Hero

Feedback on cataloged Anime Music Videos

Moderators: seasons, Mol

Forum rules
Please observe the following unique rules for this forum:
  • Please limit your new threads (not replies) to one per week. If you have several new videos to announce, create one thread for all the videos. (Note: if you forget one you can edit your post!)
  • Offsite links are allowed, but you are required to have a catalog entry for that video as well. Threads announcing videos that do not contain a catalog entry will be moved to the Awaiting Catalog Entry sub-forum and will be deleted in 2 weeks if an entry is not created.
  • When posting announcements, it is recommended that you include links to the catalog entries (using the video ID) in your post.
  • Videos that do not contain anime are allowed to be announced in the Other Videos section and are not required to have catalog entries.
User avatar
EkaCoralian
Joined: Fri Nov 28, 2008 10:01 am
Status: Trying to get the time to edit. x_x;
Location: Canada
Org Profile

Re: The Iron Hero

Post by EkaCoralian » Wed Nov 03, 2010 7:58 am

CodeZTM wrote:That was... That was....

HOLY SHIT. HEROMAN = IRON GIANT.

The way everything matched was just FANTASTIC. What an amazing and fun trailer! I usually don't even LIKE trailers, but this was one of the most adorable things ever. The editing was really great, the lip sync was fairly accurate and the overall atmosphere was just THERE.

Now, a few scenes fell a little flat here and there, but on the whole, it was just a really great experience.

Very nice job. Very very nice job.

/goes to find VHS of this movie and relieve more of said childhood
=D Thank you so much! (And reliving your childhood through this movie is a great idea. I must've done it at least twice while working on this trailer. xD)
Ikore wrote:indeed pretty sweet :up:

... I never watched this movie hehe... booyah!
Image
But really. You should watch the Iron Giant. :3
Thanks!
Panky wrote:Wow, that was such a good combo. While there were a few scenes that felt long on the run, the part in the beach was great and overall pretty good.
Nice trailer :)
Thanks very much! Ugh the beach scene took me forever to do as well. xD I mean there's literally one scene when Joey just dives into an ocean, but the problem is that its stormy, dark, and generally just didn't hit the atmosphere. So I had to go with wading. =P Heroman in the water was easy enough, since he doesn't really go near water in any other circumstance. xD;
Hagaren Viper wrote:I can only echo what was already stated, this combo fit together perfectly, to the point where I couldn't remember what the actual Iron Giant looked like xD Great job finding all the parallels between the two. Well worth spoiling myself a bit [/still has a handfull of eps to watch].

Also agree with a couple of scenes seeming off, like where Joey says "We've gotta hide!"...But he's already hiding.
Fair enough. I s'pose I got kind of lazy at that hiding scene. =P Originally I was trying to find a clip from that same episode when Joey tells Heroman that they, well, have to hide. But most of the scenes involved either them hiding or them running. I guess I could've gone with Joey pleading to Heroman at the end of episode 1 though, come to think of it now... xD; Oh well.
And hah. xD Weeeeell looks like you're going to have to rewatch the movie. ;D Thanks!
Rubeeh wrote:That!!! For me it's impossible to dislike any of your videos >:
<3 <3 <3 <3
:awesome: Love you Ruby. <3 Thanks so much!
Mastamind wrote:Nice :up: The lipsynch and some scenes could have used more work at times, but good job at fitting the anime with the lyrics and sound effects.
Much obliged. C= (Sound effects were fun to match up to. : D xD Though I'll admit, I'm guilty of trying to pull off one thudding sound effect with an effect akin to that of lightning. xD; There were just no scenes I could remember that had Heroman just falling and sitting down normally.)
Enigma wrote:Saw this yesterday. Enjoyed it a bit, brought back some memories. Fucking awesome movie/trailer though.
Oh indeed. Iron Giant is a godly movie. <3
Glad you enjoyed it, if even a little bit. ^_^
Dr. Faux Pas wrote:I liked it. You drew your parallels clearly, and a lot of the foley integrated seamlessly. The cuts during dialogue felt off-kilter sometimes when you changed the angle of the speaker mid-sentence. I also thought the translucent WB logo looked weird, since it's officially shown as opaque. One solution would have been to mask it out, but I think it would have worked just as well with it completely removed. You could also show a parody logo or one for Studio DEEN to further link the sources. Similarly, the final shot where the title is shown would have really sold your concept if you'd mocked up a screen that read "The Iron Hero". Good work.

ps - Is Hogarth's Heroman-double a boy or a girl? <_<
Thanks, I appreciate the feedback. I was a bit iffy on the logo as well (and was planning to try and mask out the UFO so it would overlap the logo, but laziness took over, I'll admit.) I was also planning on adding the Iron Hero as an outline from the start, but I decided not to because of the audio saying 'The Iron Giant' and the fact that I fail at Photoshop. Working on improving in it. -_-'
Thanks though. =D And (oh I knew someone would ask this question xD) Joey, Hogarth's anime counterpart, is in fact a boy. He's just one the most feminine-looking and sounding boys in anime I've seen yet.
Ikore wrote:we are still not pretty sure :uhoh:
Hey, don't go misleading people now. XD
Image

User avatar
Cross/fade
Type-Moon <3
Joined: Mon May 17, 2004 11:28 am
Org Profile

Re: The Iron Hero

Post by Cross/fade » Wed Nov 03, 2010 5:07 pm

This was pretty nice !
The combo was definitely spot on and trailer looks believable.

User avatar
drewaconclusion
What this is, I don't even...
Joined: Thu Feb 24, 2005 11:29 pm
Org Profile

Re: The Iron Hero

Post by drewaconclusion » Thu Nov 04, 2010 11:35 am

Bonus points for using The Iron Giant period. This was nicely done to boot.

Though, on 2-3 clips, the video quality got kind of weird; but that's being really, really picky.
ImageImageImage
ImageImageImage

User avatar
Glitzer
Joined: Thu Jan 28, 2010 4:05 am
Org Profile

Re: The Iron Hero

Post by Glitzer » Thu Nov 04, 2010 7:43 pm

I've seen trailers with the utmost effort put into them but without a solid concept, their value is undermined.

Here, your idea flowed spotlessly. I can honestly say that if I had not seen the Iron Man movie then you could of very easily tricked me into thinking this is a trailer for the actual anime. That, I think, is the ideal trailer.

I've actually only seen the movie once many moons ago, however I'm very impressed at how your trailer sparked some interesting memories of it that were lost to me. Like Code, I have the sudden desire to watch Ironman, along with the actual anime.

I've also just started my own trailer as well, and I'm going have to request your expert opinion :wink:

User avatar
EkaCoralian
Joined: Fri Nov 28, 2008 10:01 am
Status: Trying to get the time to edit. x_x;
Location: Canada
Org Profile

Re: The Iron Hero

Post by EkaCoralian » Fri Nov 05, 2010 8:03 pm

Cross/fade wrote:This was pretty nice !
The combo was definitely spot on and trailer looks believable.
Thanks, Cross. : D It killed me to wait 15 episodes to finally sit down and make it, but it was well worth it. ^^
drewaconclusion wrote:Bonus points for using The Iron Giant period. This was nicely done to boot.

Though, on 2-3 clips, the video quality got kind of weird; but that's being really, really picky.
Thanks a lot Drew. : D (Iron Giant = win anyways. :3 xD)
Yeah I think the quality messups were mainly the beginning and one shot of where Heroman leaps up. I'm not entirely sure why the beginning was pixelated like that (I mean it got like that before I put in a pre-rendered clip.. o-0) but Heroman's leap was from a credited opening. There's a textless version out there but I kept messing up downloading it. It was weird; bad file, I guess.
Glitzer wrote:I've seen trailers with the utmost effort put into them but without a solid concept, their value is undermined.

Here, your idea flowed spotlessly. I can honestly say that if I had not seen the Iron Man movie then you could of very easily tricked me into thinking this is a trailer for the actual anime. That, I think, is the ideal trailer.

I've actually only seen the movie once many moons ago, however I'm very impressed at how your trailer sparked some interesting memories of it that were lost to me. Like Code, I have the sudden desire to watch Ironman, along with the actual anime.

I've also just started my own trailer as well, and I'm going have to request your expert opinion. :wink:
=D Thank you so much! (And I'm sure you meant Iron Giant there. XD) Heroman overall was actually quite nice: a good blend of shounen and light-hearted romance. Not incredibly intense from my view, but an enjoyable watch. Especially at the end. <3
And b'aw, you're too kind. xD I'd love to help beta it (though I'm sure its flawless and awesome. xD)
Image

User avatar
Mister Anderson
Joined: Wed Dec 07, 2005 6:27 am
Org Profile

Re: The Iron Hero

Post by Mister Anderson » Sun Nov 07, 2010 10:17 pm

I cannot fault that trailer in any way, shape or form. You clearly piss excellence.

Great job!

User avatar
AimoAio
Being elegantly...lazy
Joined: Sun Mar 16, 2008 12:19 pm
Location: Somewhere
Contact:
Org Profile

Re: The Iron Hero

Post by AimoAio » Mon Nov 08, 2010 8:31 am

That was gewd, no-VERY gewd, actually no make that EXCELLENT! :awesome:

Also I was SO convinced that he was a girl until the trailer said "a boy".....:rofl:

Anyways gudjob.I liked it very muchly. ;)

User avatar
Phantasmagoriat
Joined: Mon Feb 06, 2006 11:26 pm
Status: ☁SteamPunked≈☂
Contact:
Org Profile

Re: The Iron Hero

Post by Phantasmagoriat » Tue Nov 09, 2010 8:28 pm

Pretty solid trailer :pizza:

As a side note, for something that's supposed to be 720p, I was expecting it to look much better, like at 1:51, so that was a bit of a distraction, but yeah, trailer was good.:up:
PLAY FREEDOOM!! | Phan Picks! | THE424SHOW | YouTube | "Painkiller" | Vanilla MIDI's
"Effort to Understand; Effort to be Understood; to See through Different Eyes."

User avatar
EkaCoralian
Joined: Fri Nov 28, 2008 10:01 am
Status: Trying to get the time to edit. x_x;
Location: Canada
Org Profile

Re: The Iron Hero

Post by EkaCoralian » Fri Nov 12, 2010 11:14 am

Mister Anderson wrote:I cannot fault that trailer in any way, shape or form. You clearly piss excellence.

Great job!
XDD
Thanks! The underlined comment there was especially awesome, lol. :awesome:
AimoAio wrote:That was gewd, no-VERY gewd, actually no make that EXCELLENT! :awesome:

Also I was SO convinced that he was a girl until the trailer said "a boy"..... :rofl:

Anyways gudjob.I liked it very muchly. :wink:
No, thank YOU for the lovely comment. : D
ROFL yeah I don't blame you. Even when you watch the TV series he sounds like a girl (which he is voiced by, but y'know. =P)
Phantasmagoriat wrote:Pretty solid trailer :pizza:

As a side note, for something that's supposed to be 720p, I was expecting it to look much better, like at 1:51, so that was a bit of a distraction, but yeah, trailer was good. :up:
Thank you. C= And yeah, some of the quality bits were kind of wavering (though I still don't know how the beginning got so pixelated...) but like at that point you mentioned, that was from an OP that I had to crop the subs out of. ^^;; So that's understandable.
Thanks again!
Image

Locked

Return to “AMV Announcements & Feedback”