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KiRo - Your Generic Romance Stuff [Iron Chef 07-Czech] >.<"

Post by Kukinos » Sat Jan 01, 2011 12:06 pm

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It was my firts AMV contest and I failed. (I think >.>)
I started on Monday (the last day of Iron Chef 07), because I have got many problems with VirtualDub.
So I have been really out of time, but still I tried my best.
Hope you little enjoy it. ^^"
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Post by CodeZTM » Mon Jan 03, 2011 1:51 pm

I thought you did a pretty good job.

A few minor things though:

1) Watch lip flap.

2) Stay focued on what you're doing. This was supposed to be a romance amv, but you had a whole segment dedicated to fuko and her sister's deal. Stick with the couple. ;)

3) You had a REALLY FUNKY song shift around 1:47. It was distracting. IF you plan on cutting a song, make sure and cut it in a manner that is audially appealing.

4) The AMV needed more "kick" during the chorus. While I know that the series isn't exactly action-oritented like bleach is, I think a little more movement or action with the characters during the chorus would do you a better job.

Overall, nice job though. I hope I see more. :up:

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Post by Kukinos » Tue Jan 04, 2011 10:41 am

CodeZTM wrote:I thought you did a pretty good job.

A few minor things though:

1) Watch lip flap.

2) Stay focued on what you're doing. This was supposed to be a romance amv, but you had a whole segment dedicated to fuko and her sister's deal. Stick with the couple. ;)

3) You had a REALLY FUNKY song shift around 1:47. It was distracting. IF you plan on cutting a song, make sure and cut it in a manner that is audially appealing.

4) The AMV needed more "kick" during the chorus. While I know that the series isn't exactly action-oritented like bleach is, I think a little more movement or action with the characters during the chorus would do you a better job.

Overall, nice job though. I hope I see more. :up:
Thanks!
1) Yep, You're right. There is so many lip flaps, because like I said, I have been really out of time.

2)Yep, You're right again. :D That was a big mistake and I'll focus next time! :sweat: (I promise)

3)I thought it fits like a glove, but I was wrong. (Really wrong)

4)Yep, more movement will be next time much better. :ying:

Thank you for your oponion I'm really appreciate for that! PEACE! :D
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Post by Chained(E)Studio » Tue Jan 04, 2011 11:44 pm

CodeZTM wrote: 3) You had a REALLY FUNKY song shift around 1:47. It was distracting. IF you plan on cutting a song, make sure and cut it in a manner that is audially appealing.
Yeah that caught me off guard a lot :3
But Nice-ish :up:
IC's can be a bit hard sometimes, I've never entered an Mega Iron Chef though, just litte "Hey you friend, IC me now stuff."
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Post by Kukinos » Sat Jan 08, 2011 7:02 pm

Chained(E)Studio wrote:
CodeZTM wrote: 3) You had a REALLY FUNKY song shift around 1:47. It was distracting. IF you plan on cutting a song, make sure and cut it in a manner that is audially appealing.
Yeah that caught me off guard a lot :3
But Nice-ish :up:
IC's can be a bit hard sometimes, I've never entered an Mega Iron Chef though, just litte "Hey you friend, IC me now stuff."
Yep. Whatever, I'll go play minesweeper. :x
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Post by EkaCoralian » Sun Jan 09, 2011 2:13 pm

Aw, how cute. :'D Liked this a lot. ^_^ I thought the transition to Fuko's bit was a tad out of place (though it fit the lyrics, its mainly a TomoNagi video, so... yeah), but otherwise I liked. :33
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Post by Kukinos » Sat Jan 15, 2011 6:16 pm

EkaCoralian wrote:Aw, how cute. :'D Liked this a lot. ^_^ I thought the transition to Fuko's bit was a tad out of place (though it fit the lyrics, its mainly a TomoNagi video, so... yeah), but otherwise I liked. :33
Thanks ! :ying:
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