KiRo - Your Generic Romance Stuff [Iron Chef 07-Czech] >.<"
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- Kukinos
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KiRo - Your Generic Romance Stuff [Iron Chef 07-Czech] >.<"
It was my firts AMV contest and I failed. (I think >.>)
I started on Monday (the last day of Iron Chef 07), because I have got many problems with VirtualDub.
So I have been really out of time, but still I tried my best.
Hope you little enjoy it. ^^"
By oggy
- CodeZTM
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Re: KiRo - Your Generic Romance Stuff [Iron Chef 07-Czech] >
I thought you did a pretty good job.
A few minor things though:
1) Watch lip flap.
2) Stay focued on what you're doing. This was supposed to be a romance amv, but you had a whole segment dedicated to fuko and her sister's deal. Stick with the couple.
3) You had a REALLY FUNKY song shift around 1:47. It was distracting. IF you plan on cutting a song, make sure and cut it in a manner that is audially appealing.
4) The AMV needed more "kick" during the chorus. While I know that the series isn't exactly action-oritented like bleach is, I think a little more movement or action with the characters during the chorus would do you a better job.
Overall, nice job though. I hope I see more.
A few minor things though:
1) Watch lip flap.
2) Stay focued on what you're doing. This was supposed to be a romance amv, but you had a whole segment dedicated to fuko and her sister's deal. Stick with the couple.
3) You had a REALLY FUNKY song shift around 1:47. It was distracting. IF you plan on cutting a song, make sure and cut it in a manner that is audially appealing.
4) The AMV needed more "kick" during the chorus. While I know that the series isn't exactly action-oritented like bleach is, I think a little more movement or action with the characters during the chorus would do you a better job.
Overall, nice job though. I hope I see more.
- Kukinos
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Re: KiRo - Your Generic Romance Stuff [Iron Chef 07-Czech] >
Thanks!CodeZTM wrote:I thought you did a pretty good job.
A few minor things though:
1) Watch lip flap.
2) Stay focued on what you're doing. This was supposed to be a romance amv, but you had a whole segment dedicated to fuko and her sister's deal. Stick with the couple.
3) You had a REALLY FUNKY song shift around 1:47. It was distracting. IF you plan on cutting a song, make sure and cut it in a manner that is audially appealing.
4) The AMV needed more "kick" during the chorus. While I know that the series isn't exactly action-oritented like bleach is, I think a little more movement or action with the characters during the chorus would do you a better job.
Overall, nice job though. I hope I see more.
1) Yep, You're right. There is so many lip flaps, because like I said, I have been really out of time.
2)Yep, You're right again. That was a big mistake and I'll focus next time! (I promise)
3)I thought it fits like a glove, but I was wrong. (Really wrong)
4)Yep, more movement will be next time much better.
Thank you for your oponion I'm really appreciate for that! PEACE!
By oggy
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Re: KiRo - Your Generic Romance Stuff [Iron Chef 07-Czech] >
Yeah that caught me off guard a lot :3CodeZTM wrote: 3) You had a REALLY FUNKY song shift around 1:47. It was distracting. IF you plan on cutting a song, make sure and cut it in a manner that is audially appealing.
But Nice-ish
IC's can be a bit hard sometimes, I've never entered an Mega Iron Chef though, just litte "Hey you friend, IC me now stuff."
- Kukinos
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Re: KiRo - Your Generic Romance Stuff [Iron Chef 07-Czech] >
Yep. Whatever, I'll go play minesweeper.Chained(E)Studio wrote:Yeah that caught me off guard a lot :3CodeZTM wrote: 3) You had a REALLY FUNKY song shift around 1:47. It was distracting. IF you plan on cutting a song, make sure and cut it in a manner that is audially appealing.
But Nice-ish
IC's can be a bit hard sometimes, I've never entered an Mega Iron Chef though, just litte "Hey you friend, IC me now stuff."
By oggy
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Re: KiRo - Your Generic Romance Stuff [Iron Chef 07-Czech] >
Aw, how cute. :'D Liked this a lot. ^_^ I thought the transition to Fuko's bit was a tad out of place (though it fit the lyrics, its mainly a TomoNagi video, so... yeah), but otherwise I liked. :33
- Kukinos
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Re: KiRo - Your Generic Romance Stuff [Iron Chef 07-Czech] >
Thanks !EkaCoralian wrote:Aw, how cute. :'D Liked this a lot. ^_^ I thought the transition to Fuko's bit was a tad out of place (though it fit the lyrics, its mainly a TomoNagi video, so... yeah), but otherwise I liked. :33
By oggy