Hero of the Leaf Village

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BlackAmvs
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Hero of the Leaf Village

Post by BlackAmvs » Sun Jun 03, 2012 1:45 pm


People are calling this my first pro amv. I hope you like this and please leave some feedback.

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Re: Hero of the Leaf Village

Post by TheSkywalker6117 » Mon Jun 04, 2012 11:52 am

offbeat,sync is not good enough, anime is overused, when the song is getting faster the sync is getting better too i think. Is it your first vid? for first i say its not bad, but you need more practice i think:)

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Re: Hero of the Leaf Village

Post by BlackAmvs » Wed Jun 06, 2012 3:33 pm

Thanks for feedback

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Re: Hero of the Leaf Village

Post by CodeZTM » Wed Jun 06, 2012 3:45 pm

That actually wasn't all that bad. I'm not as big of a fan of Naruto, but this was pretty nicely done.


The Pros:

Pretty nice editing. It was pretty well cut for the music and showed off the action in an appealing way.

Interesting way to present the AMV in a more theatrical manner. I liked that.

The Cons:

The opening is really slow and does not fit the matching pace of the increasingly more powerful music.
Watch the spelling when using fonts. You used the incorrect form of "here".

TV Watermarks are something that can be cropped out to make a better viewing pleasure for the audience.

The way that the video ended without any closure bothered me. I think that you could have lengthened the video a bit to show us a cleared ending.

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