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Sparky1-4
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Taken

Post by Sparky1-4 » Sun Jun 17, 2012 8:23 pm

Here's something that I've been working on for the past couple of days:

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3_3vXblLTHE

The watch scene was my attempt at something original. It's poorly modeled, but not to the point at which you can't tell what it is.
Any critique is welcome ;D
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Re: Taken

Post by Chained(E)Studio » Sun Jun 17, 2012 10:01 pm

Funky poster =3

I like the nice little intro with the talking, and the chemicals needed for the alchemy they were going to be doing.

But not a fan of the font or the long window closing effect at :1:06ish it blocked off what was going in the background with this really dark scene that you can barely see anything on >.>, and it sort of goes slow too at 1:10 till the end... some of the effects were interesting though especially with some more work think it would have been pulled a little nicer =3
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Re: Taken

Post by Sparky1-4 » Mon Jun 18, 2012 4:35 pm

Thanks for commenting :P. There were a couple of things which I wanted to do different(that diminishing border scene included), though in the end my motivation to attempting to make the video "perfect" just faded I guess :/
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