Raging Star

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Red Drake Kai
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Raging Star

Post by Red Drake Kai » Mon Jul 09, 2012 8:04 pm

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I spent probably 6 months with 6 seconds unfinished. However I finally finished. It's my first amv finished in 4 years.
So I hope you all enjoy it. Hopefully my editing skills will get much much better.

As I watched it probably would go in for a wanna be intro for an anime.

Thanks for watching I guess? :wink: :?:
"If music be the food of love, make amvs"

~Hamlet Wrong

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irriadin
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Re: Raging Star

Post by irriadin » Tue Jul 10, 2012 10:13 am

It was hard to look past the technical problems in the video. Lots of nasty visual artifacts, pillarboxed AR, and subtitles for the lyrics. Don't put subtitles in your video unless it's absolutely necessary :nono: (like for a sing-a-long)

As for the video content itself, the scene selection doesn't seem particularly inspired. I'm not familiar with Star Driver, but it seemed like you took scenes from mostly the openings and overlayed other scenes on top of that to try to lyric sync. My advice would be to take care of the technical problems first, and then try to get your scene selection to be more varied. Good luck!

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Re: Raging Star

Post by Red Drake Kai » Wed Jul 11, 2012 11:13 am

Well I wanted to try something new, I guess it doesn't work. Thanks for your comment.
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