Say Goodbye to the Light (Steins;Gate AMV)

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Say Goodbye to the Light (Steins;Gate AMV)

Post by Daramue » Wed Oct 31, 2012 4:25 pm



This is my first AMV. I first had the idea for this AMV upon watching steins;gate; I was hoping to capture some of the dark tension present around episode 12. That impending sense of hopelessness and dread; it was powerful stuff to me, and I wanted to find a way to convey it. What better way than through an AMV?

This stuff does not come naturally to me; learning Sony Vegas was difficult for me but in the end I was able to produce something I was proud of. I then submitted this AMV to Otakon 2012. As a first outing, I'm satisfied with it. While nothing amazing, I hope you'll enjoy it; if I've accomplished that, then that is good enough for me.
I created/designed my own anime blog. Maybe check it out sometime? - >http://www.daramue.com

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Re: Say Goodbye to the Light (Steins;Gate AMV)

Post by Cecco » Wed Oct 31, 2012 4:46 pm

You first amv?!?!? o.o it's pretty nice.
for you first amv it's very good editing,selection scene,flow ect. :up: :up:
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We must remember the my first amv,that I had done this and 100thousand times better XD

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Re: Say Goodbye to the Light (Steins;Gate AMV)

Post by irriadin » Wed Oct 31, 2012 7:54 pm

Keep working on your motion & transition fluidity and you're gonna be a beast someday. Let's own Level Up :up:

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Re: Say Goodbye to the Light (Steins;Gate AMV)

Post by Warlike Swans » Wed Oct 31, 2012 8:20 pm

There are some places where the flow is off and it needed better polishing. That said, it's a *crazy* impressive first work. Look forward to seeing your next.

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Re: Say Goodbye to the Light (Steins;Gate AMV)

Post by Daramue » Wed Oct 31, 2012 8:34 pm

I agree with the criticism on the flow; only after I've made two more amv's can I notice the flaws present in this video. Flow and scene selection are things I am developing a better sense of as my skills improve. I appreciate the compliments as well. Thank you for watching!

Also, excited for level up. :)
I created/designed my own anime blog. Maybe check it out sometime? - >http://www.daramue.com

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