Akame Ga Kill! AMV - Feedback?

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FullxSpeed
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Akame Ga Kill! AMV - Feedback?

Post by FullxSpeed » Mon Nov 03, 2014 11:34 am

Hey guys!

I´m just an ordinary hobbybased AMV creator and´d like to present you my newest AMV of Akame ga Kill!.
I know there are much better ones, but I´d be really thankfull for any feedback and advise.

Anime: Akame ga Kill!
Music: Starset - My Demons
Link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_9yiVfDvSo0

I hope some of you will take the time to look at it! ;)

mfg FullxSpeed

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The_McLaughlin
Joined: Sat Oct 13, 2007 12:12 am
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Re: Akame Ga Kill! AMV - Feedback?

Post by The_McLaughlin » Wed Nov 05, 2014 1:09 am

Don't forget to link to the video on your org profile as well. You can do this by going to your profile from the homepage, click on the video you want to link in the light orangish Information box there is a little chain link Icon. click on that and copy and paste the stuff in the first box into your post. It should say (and have your videos url number I just put #'s for this example) "[vidid]######[/vidid]". Usually people won't look at the video otherwise because it needs to be logged in the video catalog here on the org however people do not know if it is or not when you only post a youtube link. I'll take a look at it here in the next few days or so.

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pan_dbgt01
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Re: Akame Ga Kill! AMV - Feedback?

Post by pan_dbgt01 » Wed Nov 05, 2014 8:57 am

Actually this was really good :)

I loved your sync and clip variety. I noticed some lip flap, but that was the only thing I really noticed.

Very awesome.

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The_McLaughlin
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Re: Akame Ga Kill! AMV - Feedback?

Post by The_McLaughlin » Thu Nov 06, 2014 10:31 pm

Not bad. I liked it. I think the only thing that bothered me, and it was really small, was at :15-:22 where you have those zooms onto the characters, some of them hit on certain beats, others on another, and then a few on no beats... That was the only thing that bothered me though, so overall I thought it was pretty good.

Jogol
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Re: Akame Ga Kill! AMV - Feedback?

Post by Jogol » Thu Nov 06, 2014 11:15 pm

I really liked it, but there was one thing bothering me a bit. The pan across the characters at 0:15, I think it would look better if the panning continued in the background. Imo, continuing from where you were makes it look like its stuttering.

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