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another simple edited amv

Post by chronosek » Tue Jun 09, 2015 2:17 pm

Hello, I had small break, but now want announce my new simple fast creation (nothing special, but maybe someone will enjoy some... )


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Re: another simple edited amv

Post by Kireblue » Tue Jun 09, 2015 2:58 pm

not gonna lie. It was really hard for me to take this this combo seriously (probably because I've only seen joke videos with the song so far). But when I finally was able to, I felt that you used too many action and battle scenes and didn't really develop the female character that much. The viewer can see that she's angry, but you don't really show us why. Even during the slower parts of the song, all we see is her lashing out. And so I would advise you to make your scenes a little more varied and try to make the motivations of your characters clear to even people that haven't seen the anime.

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Re: another simple edited amv

Post by chronosek » Tue Jun 09, 2015 4:58 pm

thanks for comment, i didnt thought so deep about this :D and was short of footage

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Re: another simple edited amv

Post by CrackTheSky » Tue Jun 09, 2015 11:16 pm

It's weird how well this worked. I ended up liking this waaaaayy more than I thought I would. It's not perfect, but you hit all the right emotional buttons and it's an oddly satisfying video when all is said and done. Good job taking a completely leftfield combination and turning it into something worth watching :up:

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Re: another simple edited amv

Post by Mol » Wed Jun 10, 2015 2:39 am

Widze sam sie wzieles do roboty :P.

This is quite interesing combo, tho i wouldn't say it works too well. Tho as Crackthesky said it hits rights notes. Not bad attempt :dino:
Still better than that MMO.
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Re: another simple edited amv

Post by chronosek » Wed Jun 10, 2015 7:46 am

To M'o'l: A było kilka dni wolnego, to co będę czekać.

Ya it is not perfect, only a short joy of returning to editing

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