Zero F [Anime Blues Con] Best Action Winner

[Tsiahiv]

Video: Zero F
Category: Action, Trailer, Drama
Anime: Fate/Zero, Fate/Stay Night UBW
Song: Point of No Return
Artist: Starset
Creator: Tsiah IV

Howdy guys! This is my first time posting for AMV response on the forum. Any criticism helps me tremendously and I appreciate anyone who takes out the time of day. This series was absolutely amazing. If you enjoyed the video please like and subscribe for more. ^_^

[bleachcenter]

Well your AMV certainly had it's moments. I particularly liked the stills of the M.C. at around 47 seconds, but there were definitely a lot more moments I enjoyed.

I wasn't a fan of some of the effects (cookie cutter and spin-y thing, I'm looking at y'all) and some of your flow felt staggered at points, but overall it was a fun watch. ^^

[Tsiahiv]

Thanks so much for the honest opinion. I agree with you on the flow aspect. I've been working on that and transitioning, but hopefully my next video will be better

[allegoriest]

+1 the previous comment definitely! There were definitely a lot of points where you nailed the timing, some of the fight scenes seemed especially well-synced to the beat and felt really SMOOTH flowing into each other which was awesome. Those things were so solid that the extra effects (as mentioned above) seemed to detract and distract from what you did so well. I also felt that by slipping back and forth between F/Z and FSN with not a lot of rhyme or reason I lost the story/theme and it just became too much of a fight montage with no arc behind it (they're just such different stories I think you have to be really attentive to that). I look forward to seeing more of your AMVs!

[Tsiahiv]

+1 the previous comment definitely! There were definitely a lot of points where you nailed the timing, some of the fight scenes seemed especially well-synced to the beat and felt really SMOOTH flowing into each other which was awesome. Those things were so solid that the extra effects (as mentioned above) seemed to detract and distract from what you did so well. I also felt that by slipping back and forth between F/Z and FSN with not a lot of rhyme or reason I lost the story/theme and it just became too much of a fight montage with no arc behind it (they're just such different stories I think you have to be really attentive to that). I look forward to seeing more of your AMVs!

Thanks Allegoriest! I believe the story became out of tact because I chose the wrong clips. I should've chosen more powerful scenes to keep the arc together. I also try to tone down on effects because I've realized that the anime community absolutely hates them. Lol. In that same notion, in each video I like to try a new idea that I haven't done before. I came across your Kekkai Sensan and Centuries videos, they were both great. I subscribed to your channel, keep up the good work, waiting on the next.

[Kireblue]

The flow was good at the faster parts because you put scenes together that had similar movements. But at the slower parts, the movements because a little disjointed. But the editing was still pretty solid overall. Not bad

[Tsiahiv]

The flow was good at the faster parts because you put scenes together that had similar movements. But at the slower parts, the movements because a little disjointed. But the editing was still pretty solid overall. Not bad

Thanks for checking it out Kire. I'll try to work on my pacing more.

[Tsiahiv]

New update everyone. I've just been notified that I won "best action" AMV at the Anime Blues Con. Thanks to everyone for the tips, wish me luck in the nationals!