VonHope [Terror in Resonance]

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VonHope [Terror in Resonance]

Post by TheAsian777 » Fri Mar 04, 2016 2:39 pm

Video: VonHope
Category: Drama
Anime: Terror in Resonance
Song: Entrance, Don't Stay Here
Artist: Frames
Creator: TheAsian777
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oGlDT8DV4i8
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Re: VonHope [Terror in Resonance]

Post by Kireblue » Wed Mar 16, 2016 11:53 am

This video has an excellent buildup that did a great job at drawing me in and getting me interested in the story. The only complaint that I have is that at about 2/3 into the video, it starts to loose all of it's momentum. The drums in the song really start to become prevalent at that part, but you kinda stop syncing to them, and some of your scenes start to feel way too long. Reusing the scene at the grave at the end was still a very nice touch though :up:

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Re: VonHope [Terror in Resonance]

Post by TheAsian777 » Thu Mar 17, 2016 10:31 am

kireblue wrote:This video has an excellent buildup that did a great job at drawing me in and getting me interested in the story. The only complaint that I have is that at about 2/3 into the video, it starts to loose all of it's momentum. The drums in the song really start to become prevalent at that part, but you kinda stop syncing to them, and some of your scenes start to feel way too long. Reusing the scene at the grave at the end was still a very nice touch though :up:
Thanks for the feedback! I spent a lot of time on the 1st minute of the video, glad it drew you in. I think 2:40 and on I hit a block and I wasn't entirely sure what to do. I wanted to tell a story. I knew how I wanted to start and end but, looking in hindsight, I completely neglected a large bulk of the video. Always room to improve! Thanks again for the feedback! :D

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