Boku no Academia (My first and second AMV ever!)

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TheIncompetent
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Boku no Academia (My first and second AMV ever!)

Post by TheIncompetent » Sun May 15, 2016 2:38 pm

Hi these are my first two attempt to make AMV







I put my background style on it! Fell free to disagree with this style. Peace!
Enjoy!!

[added vidid and youtube embed - Kireblue]

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Lingchi
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Re: Boku no Academia (My first and second AMV ever!)

Post by Lingchi » Mon May 16, 2016 5:05 am

So the first song seems more emotional and I didn't really get what you were going with the clips. You show a lot of clips of the hero feeling emotions but he's happy and then sad and then smiling again very quickly and I have no idea why. Now granted I haven't watched this show so from my perspective the clips seem random. Maybe this is my fault. I also didn't like the title of the show popping up because it took me out of the show I was trying to figure out. There was a sync there with the punch but I feel like something like that needs to either be at the very beginning or the very end if you use it at all.

The second song has all these great build ups and drops but none of them seemed built up to with the clips. Nothing really huge happens at the drops which are the biggest parts of the song. And you show a lot of people stumbling back and being terrified when you have this fun beat going on. I would have cut all that out and just went with action shots for a high energy song like that. I also haven't seen this show though so if you're doing things I'm missing I apologize.

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Re: Boku no Academia (My first and second AMV ever!)

Post by TheIncompetent » Mon May 16, 2016 6:11 am

Hi, thanks for your opinion :) and don't apologize beacuse of your thoughts. i will consider what u expressed i the next AMV i'll do next week ! peace and have a ice day

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