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Rayzox
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New AMV [Tawawa On Monday - Till I Found You]

Post by Rayzox » Fri Aug 24, 2018 6:09 pm

Hi everybody ! I present you my new AMV made on Adobe Premiere (and After Effect). Opinions ? Thank you.

/!\ LINK UPDATE *FIX START TITLE* /!\

/!\ THIS AMV CONTAINS POTENTIAL SPOIL /!\





MOUNTING TIME : 12Hours = (10Hours [Adobe Premiere] + 2Hours [After Effect]).
Last edited by Rayzox on Sat Aug 25, 2018 6:21 am, edited 3 times in total.

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vkamv
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Re: New AMV [Tawawa On Monday - Till I Found You]

Post by vkamv » Fri Aug 24, 2018 8:13 pm

Interesting... I have never seen this anime nor have I heard this song before, so I went into this blind. I read the category and it states "Serious, Romance, Sentimental" so I was expecting a serious romance video. I would say it was more comedic and lighthearted than serious, which isn't bad. I feel like you did a good job with the color grading, lighting, and scene selection. I felt some of the effects were over used and could have had more variety. Also, your syncing with effects and beats were not consistently applied. For example, at 1:46 there was no effect and I feel there should have been to stay consistent with the style of the video thus far.

Other than that I enjoyed the video. Good work!

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Re: New AMV [Tawawa On Monday - Till I Found You]

Post by Rayzox » Sat Aug 25, 2018 5:08 am

vkamv wrote:Interesting... I have never seen this anime nor have I heard this song before, so I went into this blind. I read the category and it states "Serious, Romance, Sentimental" so I was expecting a serious romance video. I would say it was more comedic and lighthearted than serious, which isn't bad. I feel like you did a good job with the color grading, lighting, and scene selection. I felt some of the effects were over used and could have had more variety. Also, your syncing with effects and beats were not consistently applied. For example, at 1:46 there was no effect and I feel there should have been to stay consistent with the style of the video thus far.

Other than that I enjoyed the video. Good work!

Hi.
You say that at 1:46 it misses the sync with effect / beat and it's the same for some moments but it would not be like you say too much use the same effects?

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Re: New AMV [Tawawa On Monday - Till I Found You]

Post by XxAzazel » Sat Aug 25, 2018 9:39 am

Hey man , listen ur clip is a bit boring , some scenes drag too much and the scene where characters talk are considered heresy int he amv business , do not use the scenes were they talk and learn how to pan crop slightly to give a potion into static scenes, now the positive things i liked in ur clip is the cc , u got good colors and gradings are cool and the scene with tits are great aswell , keep up the good color work my dude ;)

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Re: New AMV [Tawawa On Monday - Till I Found You]

Post by vkamv » Sat Aug 25, 2018 12:39 pm

Rayzox wrote:
vkamv wrote:Interesting... I have never seen this anime nor have I heard this song before, so I went into this blind. I read the category and it states "Serious, Romance, Sentimental" so I was expecting a serious romance video. I would say it was more comedic and lighthearted than serious, which isn't bad. I feel like you did a good job with the color grading, lighting, and scene selection. I felt some of the effects were over used and could have had more variety. Also, your syncing with effects and beats were not consistently applied. For example, at 1:46 there was no effect and I feel there should have been to stay consistent with the style of the video thus far.

Other than that I enjoyed the video. Good work!

Hi.
You say that at 1:46 it misses the sync with effect / beat and it's the same for some moments but it would not be like you say too much use the same effects?
Hi. I just meant since you are already using effects to match beats you should stay consistent throughout the video. While watching that section felt odd because I was expecting something and there was nothing. It doesn't necessarily have to be the same effect either, just something to accentuate the beat.

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