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Chari
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Naruto Trailer

Post by Chari » Fri Oct 22, 2004 4:40 am

Hi there!

Here is my first Naruto video, also my FIRST Trailer :P

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=51919

here u go! :)

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Daio Kaji
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Post by Daio Kaji » Sat Oct 23, 2004 11:57 am

kule
but u edited the first part too much i think
too many cuts from the beginning up to 'Lines Are Drawn'

but from 'Lines Are Drawn' to the end, it was kule i thought

good use of dramatic clips

my gripe, when u did that inverted color shot of naruto, u should have gone to black while it was still inverted instead of going bak to color, going bak to color just made the invert seem pointless and more confusing than anything

editing with the 3rd Hokage and Orochimaru holding his knife might have been a bit too fast too, more spaced out cuts would have made it more dramatic instead of just nicely timed

the transition u used in the beginning (0:08-0:10)was okay but seemed like it was there just to be there, didn't see a purpose for that type of transition
and the spinning genins after that went by quickly and kinda contrasted to the music, the naruto shot at the end of that was good though

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Post by Chari » Sun Oct 24, 2004 11:59 am

thx Daio!

Ah, i see. U mean the clip where naruto tries to punche neji? Hmm...yeah ok, i couldn't see that it was confusing.

And the clips were to fast? I will make it better next time ;)

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