FLCL ep6 (sad version)

Borstj · Post by **Borstj** » Sun Nov 21, 2004 9:54 am

This is my very first try to make a AMV so please forgive me for the subs

anyway I have only made one amv so far so it should be pretty easy to find just search for Borstj

I would abso-flippin'-lutely love some creative critique regarding editing technique and so forth.

ooh.. and sorry for the subs

AMVfreak · Post by **AMVfreak** » Sun Nov 21, 2004 11:06 am

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=54581

Borstj · Post by **Borstj** » Sun Nov 21, 2004 12:09 pm

thanks

the post above is the link to vid

Peter_Pitlik · Post by **Peter_Pitlik** » Mon Nov 22, 2004 2:46 pm

freaky!!!!

i don;t get it

is it good? or weird??

i think its ok

downwithpants · Post by **downwithpants** » Tue Nov 23, 2004 6:57 pm

it started out well, but it would have been better if you kept the sad mood consistent throughout the piece (and not jump to fast paced scenes such as 0:51 and 1:53). the scenes were also changed too slowly for my preferences (it is possible to maintain a sad mood while moving scenes along).

AMVfreak · Post by **AMVfreak** » Tue Nov 23, 2004 11:50 pm

Hmmm.
The removal of subtitles would be nice, as it was somewhat irritating to see popping up on the bottom of the screen.

It was ok, although some scene selections I thought could have been better-
for example- the scene in the end where he cries: looks way too comedic to fit into the sad mood.

Overall, nice concept, but better editing would have made it better.

Borstj · Post by **Borstj** » Wed Nov 24, 2004 7:29 pm

thanks for the creative critique, I'm going to make a new amv soon(the new ghost in the shell movie me thinks). going to use a new editing tool, windows movie maker is way to inaccurate in editing, makes the whole thing really bothersome

the first two ones were practice, this one will be shcpechtacular... i hope

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FLCL ep6 (sad version)

FLCL ep6 (sad version)

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