hello, first post, first AVM..
damn this board is big, anyways i just made this AMV, its my first and needs a little shaping up but i am relatively happy with it. I dont have anymore time cuase i got mid terms and maybe later (summer?) i can remaster it.
i'd like some reviews please. thanks.
Trigun - Trials of Gunmen by NW
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nightwingxl
- Joined: Thu Jan 13, 2005 6:20 pm
- Location: Trinidad and Togabo
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nightwingxl
- Joined: Thu Jan 13, 2005 6:20 pm
- Location: Trinidad and Togabo
uh... like i said, first time on the forum... i am missing the "edit" feature...heh....anyway i forgot to link my AMV.. here it is
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=59280
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=59280
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Torchlight
- Joined: Thu Dec 26, 2002 5:30 pm
- Location: Ames, IA
glad to see more people trying out AMV production - welcome to the club!
some comments:
did not really see how the song "fit" with the footage
footage had subtitles in it? =/
i would like to see more edits, more cuts - too many long scenes, imo
would also like to see those edits "go along" with the music - timing
but, it looks like you used this AMV to get some practice editing clips together - for that i salute you - good luck with your next vid!
download more vids of others, see what they do - get a feel for timing. make sure to check out the excellent AMV guide by Ermac and AD: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/guides/avtech/
some comments:
did not really see how the song "fit" with the footage
footage had subtitles in it? =/
i would like to see more edits, more cuts - too many long scenes, imo
would also like to see those edits "go along" with the music - timing
but, it looks like you used this AMV to get some practice editing clips together - for that i salute you - good luck with your next vid!
download more vids of others, see what they do - get a feel for timing. make sure to check out the excellent AMV guide by Ermac and AD: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/guides/avtech/
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nightwingxl
- Joined: Thu Jan 13, 2005 6:20 pm
- Location: Trinidad and Togabo
my premeire was a pian to work with the only way to see how it truly looked was when i saved the exported. there are a few parts i know for sure needs better timing.
the first part of the song was a little understrandable...it was mainly Jay-z pumping himself up. therefore i tried to portray Vash's skills. the second was a harder part to work with, I was trying to show Wolfwood conflicting against Vash. and well the lyrics "i've become so numb..." showing Wolfwood's fate. The subtitles will be removed later this year. my next AMV i'll try to include lip synching since i could of managed to do for this one.
thanks for the review!
the first part of the song was a little understrandable...it was mainly Jay-z pumping himself up. therefore i tried to portray Vash's skills. the second was a harder part to work with, I was trying to show Wolfwood conflicting against Vash. and well the lyrics "i've become so numb..." showing Wolfwood's fate. The subtitles will be removed later this year. my next AMV i'll try to include lip synching since i could of managed to do for this one.
thanks for the review!
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hobo13
- Joined: Wed Jul 14, 2004 12:19 pm
that was pretty good for your first try, the music and the anime diddnt fit too well together, but you still pulled it off!
ive got two trigun AMVs if your interested in looking at them.
also you can simply tell people the video is in your profile, that way you dont have to post a link.
ive got two trigun AMVs if your interested in looking at them.
also you can simply tell people the video is in your profile, that way you dont have to post a link.
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and hey, its great to receive an opinion, but its also great to get a respons to that opinion, so c'mon poeple share the love and respond to your opinions. it'll make people happy!
and hey, its great to receive an opinion, but its also great to get a respons to that opinion, so c'mon poeple share the love and respond to your opinions. it'll make people happy!