School War <- First AMV :/

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Klibbnisse
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School War <- First AMV :/

Post by Klibbnisse » Thu Apr 20, 2006 2:09 pm

Morning, this is my first post in the forum and it's also an announce for my first AMV ever.

Well, as I said it's my first amv that I've ever done, thanks to the creators of AMV Hell 3 becouse it was becouse of them i wanted to make an AMV myself.

Ok, the link... check it out (yes, it's probably bad!)

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=114381

Oh! Yeah, also... the song it's pretty bad quality, sorry but i couldn't find a better version. sorry about that...

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Post by Klibbnisse » Sun Apr 23, 2006 12:02 pm

Sry, but it didn't find the edit-button...

Anime: School Rumble 2nd Term
Noise: "Trigger Happy" by Wierd Al Yankovic

Since it's my first AMV, please give some feedback ;)

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Poetic_Kaos
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Post by Poetic_Kaos » Sun Apr 23, 2006 2:05 pm

You fell short. The song is pretty funny but I don’t see how you could have shown it in the best light with only 2 episodes of material. Most of the best comedies utilize several animes. You were too limited by your source material; a lot of the lyrics were simply ignored because of it.

If you are not actually going to lip-synch you should makes scenes where it appears as though you tried. Example 0:11 that was noting more than lip flap. A lot of people would just simply assume you can’t lip-synch.

The entire video was interlaced, and there were annoying pops and skips in the audio. You should try to get a hold of some raws the logo was another point of annoyance.

If you have to recycle scenes in order to complete your video there is most likely something wrong with it. The video really started to drag because of the repetitive nature of the scene selection.
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