Sailing Out Of My Head (original creation)

aleko c · Post by **aleko c** » Wed Jun 28, 2006 4:02 pm

I'd say that the best quality in the drawings is that it matches the story's theme.Thy surely give the essence of sharp emotions.

Kisanzi · Post by **Kisanzi** » Wed Jun 28, 2006 4:41 pm

Good effort but this really doesn't belong here. What you have here is an animated short film, it's not anime or a music video at all. Sure it has music but it's not a music video...it's an independent short film with music. Don't think that I'm saying it was bad but I feel it would be better appreciated on an "animated short" fansite.

Still good effort tho. It was very similar to alot of the independent works out there dealing with surreal natures and such. I feel it would be much better if you actual hand drew the pictures and scanned them in or invested in a real animation program because it looked very "cheap", as in the quality and the look of it all. I used to watch alot of independent films and animated shorts and have seen how much the quality matters. But for a first effort it was ok.

Kraise · Post by **Kraise** » Wed Jun 28, 2006 9:16 pm

It does have a ''Hollow'' from bleach waving~~

Jebadia · Post by **Jebadia** » Wed Jun 28, 2006 9:37 pm

kisanzi wrote:Good effort but this really doesn't belong here. What you have here is an animated short film, it's not anime or a music video at all. Sure it has music but it's not a music video...it's an independent short film with music. Don't think that I'm saying it was bad but I feel it would be better appreciated on an "animated short" fansite.

Still good effort tho. It was very similar to alot of the independent works out there dealing with surreal natures and such. I feel it would be much better if you actual hand drew the pictures and scanned them in or invested in a real animation program because it looked very "cheap", as in the quality and the look of it all. I used to watch alot of independent films and animated shorts and have seen how much the quality matters. But for a first effort it was ok.

I think some people need to be reminded that original animation is allowed on this site. It's the ONLY non anime material allowed on this site. Unless the rules drastically changed during the past year that I don't know about.

Shinodude · Post by **Shinodude** » Wed Jun 28, 2006 10:02 pm

I didnt really like the amv I can tell there was allot of effort ionno just aint my fav

Flint the Dwarf · Post by **Flint the Dwarf** » Wed Jun 28, 2006 10:02 pm

Instead of another person telling you it doesn't belong here, I can't put a dim look on something so abstractly cohesive and beautifully creepy. As for kizansi's comment, I don't see how this video is any more an independent short film with music than AbsoluteDestiny's Storytelling or kamoc's is that you. This video definitely deservers a few viewings, and a good amount of respect for the effort put into it.

Knowname wrote:I uh... I uh I don't get it. Damn. I hate to think.

*gasp* You'd never know it from your other posts.

Kisanzi · Post by **Kisanzi** » Wed Jun 28, 2006 10:37 pm

Jebadia wrote:I think some people need to be reminded that original animation is allowed on this site. It's the ONLY non anime material allowed on this site. Unless the rules drastically changed during the past year that I don't know about.

I wasn't saying that original animation is against any rules, heck there are plenty of self drawn AMVs on the site like Utena Daioh and Greed vs. Envy. But those videos were done in the relation to an anime source or inspired by an anime source. As the ruling stands right now:

Vlad G. Pohnert wrote:Self made animations is a grey area and is still something to be debated further. Problem comes into that this could encompass almost anything and may not even be related to anime in most respects... For now they are on a case to case basis.

All I'm saying is that this video is "animated" but not significantly related to "anime". My main point was not derogatory to the video in any means, I used to watch a fair amount of this type of things and enjoyed them, as I did with this one. I was merely pointing out the fact that it might be better suited for a different style of site as far as in depth of creative input goes.

*Sorry for the rambling...but it sounds like everyone interpreted what I said incorrectly. I wasn't condemning the video as to it's listing here, just making a suggestion to the creator if they're seeking more constructive input is all. I apologize to the creator or anyone else if I seemed offensive in any way, that wasn't my intent. :O

Mad Arab · Post by **Mad Arab** » Thu Jun 29, 2006 5:17 am

i do agree i should'v used a real animation programme , but at first i thought using a couple filters will help cover stuff . was wrong , so bleh on me . -_-

ill check out my options as to where i can upload such videos , other types of places can also prolly be very helpful in the future , so ..

anywho , thanks for the input you all .

aleko c · Post by **aleko c** » Thu Jun 29, 2006 6:18 pm

Well,now that everyone's all happy and lucky. Maybe I can show you the banner I was talking about .I couldn't edit like I wanted to,but It isn't so bad .

aleko c · Post by **aleko c** » Thu Jun 29, 2006 6:27 pm

...Forgot to upload it in the previous post...Here it is.