Dr. Online

DarknessWarrior45 · Post by **DarknessWarrior45** » Fri Oct 20, 2006 12:50 am

My Newest Amv!!!

Anime: Ghost In The Shell Movie 1
Song: Dr. Online

Lyrics:

Everbody online?

It's the beginning of the end,
You want things to go faster.
It's the beginning of the end,
Now everything's too slow for you.
It's the beginning of the end,
You are one step closer.
It's the beginning of the end,
Say Amen

1-800-SUICIDE
Or maybe Doctor Online could help you die.
You need wings to fly,
You need someone to take your place
When you are gone.

It's the beginning of the end,
You know nothing lasts forever.
A beginning of a trend,
You need someone there to care for you.
It's the beginning of the end,
I don't think you understand .
Just a beginning of a flatline,
Together

1-800-SUICIDE
Or maybe Doctor Online could help you die.
You need wings to fly,
You need someone to take your place
When you are gone.
1-800-SUICIDE
Or maybe Doctor Online could help you die.
You need wings to fly,
You need someone to take your place
When you are gone.

Thank you for calling 1-800-SUICIDE.
If you wish to self terminate by electric shock - press 1
For termination by overdose - press 2
If you would like to make a reservation to visit our drowning pool -
please press 3
For termination by hanging - please press 4
For death by self inflicting gunshot - press 5
To speak to a representative, stay on the line.
If you dont wish to die - please hang up now.

1-800-SUICIDE
Or maybe Doctor Online could help you die.
You need wings to fly,
You need someone to take your place
When you are gone.
1-800-SUICIDE
Or maybe Doctor Online could help you die.
You need wings to fly,
You need someone to take your place
When you are gone.

Please Watch, and enjoy!

Also, please leave your comments, you guys always help me get better!

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=131314

DarknessWarrior45 · Post by **DarknessWarrior45** » Tue Oct 24, 2006 10:54 am

Can I get some feedback on my amv please?

Minion · Post by **Minion** » Tue Oct 24, 2006 11:25 am

this is an amv? - thought it was an ad.
sure, i'll check it out tonight at work and post what i thought when i get home

Esrhan · Post by **Esrhan** » Tue Oct 24, 2006 12:03 pm

DarknessWarrior45 wrote:Can I get some feedback on my amv please?

The music video itself is, how would I put it - rather bland. It is comparable to a tasteless soup. The soup is there alright, but it doesn't really give you anything.

I suggest concentrating more on lyric synch, because the song does have potential in it to match the virtual world theme of the anime. It was as if you had not given enough thought to what scenes you would use at certain segments, and decided to go with plain, raw action.

I'm sure someone around here won't like the Mpeg-2 coding method you used, but I won't go to that.

DarknessWarrior45 · Post by **DarknessWarrior45** » Tue Oct 24, 2006 2:38 pm

Thanks a lot for the feedback

BauziOLD · Post by **BauziOLD** » Tue Oct 24, 2006 2:59 pm

Tell me wich kind or typ of music it is and I will think about downloading it.

I like the lyric: "1-800-SUICIDE"

Waked my interresst.

DarknessWarrior45 · Post by **DarknessWarrior45** » Tue Oct 24, 2006 3:38 pm

It's a rock song.

Minion · Post by **Minion** » Tue Oct 24, 2006 11:16 pm

you nailed the chrous. it wasn't a bad video, but it wasn't a solid one either
noticed some interlacing at the beginning
lip sync needs work
some faster cuts to sync with the beat
wtf? she was just standing there for like 15 seocnds at the end

given this, i gave you a 3/5, which was generous. score would have been lower if i didn't really see potential in this.

my advice: remake the video. with some effort, this could be really good.

DarknessWarrior45 · Post by **DarknessWarrior45** » Wed Oct 25, 2006 1:18 am

Ok, i'll try to get rid of the interlacing, and remake the video, thank for the op!