Make a Wish {Kireblue} (2010 NYAF Drama Finalist)

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Re: Make a Wish {Kireblue} (2010 NYAF Drama Finalist)

Post by Kireblue » Tue Dec 21, 2010 4:17 am

Laerium wrote:Love this song :3 and was hoping some amv would make justice to it.
Well, it is my fav till now with it (specially the B.O.B. part); though I feel like Hayley's part could be done with a little more emotion (plus, the 'shooting stars' part, there are a lot of clips on Angel beats which could lyric sync to it, and I was hoping for a little moar lyric-match... XD).
Also, some parts could be a bit faster.

But I enjoy it :3 good job <3
Awesome :awesome: . I'm glad that you liked the B.O.B parts. And yeah, I definitely gave more emotions to B.O.B's parts since Hayley's parts were a chorus. And in terms of the "Airplanes" and "shooting stars" lyrics, I wanted to give them a more figurative meaning than literal. Although, I did start and end the AMV with Kanade's piano scene. And I did include the concert scene with the falling tickets towards the end. None of those were actually shooting stars, but that's about as close as I could get to lyric sync without being too literal.
JadeCharm wrote:I was like "Yeah! Airplanes! Let's watch this!" :mrgreen:
Thumbs up for song choice :up:
Thumbs down for not choosing Airplanes Pt2 :down: :wink:

It was nice to see how you edited it, but I think that Angel Beats just wasn't the right anime choice here.
The parts where the girl with the guitar is singing to the lyrics just didn't fit the emotions of the song. Those scenes were more Rock-like and it was weird to match them with Hayley.
The rest of the video was nice but for me you didn't capture the songs emotions.

Try to use a little zoom here and there!

3.5/5
I considered using the other version of "Airplanes", but I felt that it talks about the music industry and specific problems so much that it would have been super hard to make a AMV with it. Also, I don't like how Hayley's part was sped up to match the tempo of the song. She is a awesome singer, but her voice sounds a little awkward in the part 2 version.

In terms of the AMV, I tried to get the concert scenes to match a little better, but like you said, they were meant to be rock.
AimoAio wrote:Well I really liked that! :awesome:

Just some parts where I felt the pacing was a little slow and a few places where I felt the scene selection could be a different but it wasn't anything major that took away the overall feel the video gave off.

Anyway really enjoyed it, Angel Beats = <3 :up:
Yeah, the pace of my AMVs tends to be on the slower side :D I'm glad that you enjoyed it |:>
blaksun wrote:in my book :book: 5/5 :up:
Thanks :beer: :pizza:

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Re: Make a Wish {Kireblue} (2010 NYAF Drama Finalist)

Post by Saijiki » Tue Dec 21, 2010 10:07 am

Very Enjoyable! I loved the way you synched that because i think its a really hard song to synch to but you made a really decent job! =D i especially loved the parts when B.o.B was singing they were really awesome!! have it on comp and will watch this quite often i guess
YÜÜÜÄÄÄÄÄHHRRRRR!

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