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Re: Blue Morning

Post by Kireblue » Sun Feb 12, 2012 1:50 am

I feel that you focused a little too much on lyric syncing and not enough on mood syncing. Some of the scenes that you lyric synced to would have probably been better of you had used a figurative interpretation of it instead of a literal one. For example: it felt a little random when you lyric synced her "going in to a store" and "counting her change".

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Re: Blue Morning

Post by Frezio » Mon Feb 13, 2012 5:42 pm

Ewa also wraps in futon, like Erio xD
You know my opinion about this. Rather good. Not at all, but simply blu...good ;)
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Re: Blue Morning

Post by Centurione » Wed Feb 15, 2012 8:37 am

kireblue wrote:I feel that you focused a little too much on lyric syncing and not enough on mood syncing. Some of the scenes that you lyric synced to would have probably been better of you had used a figurative interpretation of it instead of a literal one. For example: it felt a little random when you lyric synced her "going in to a store" and "counting her change".
You're probably right. I didn't feel confident with those. Thank you for your comment ;)
Frezio wrote:Ewa also wraps in futon, like Erio xD
Where's the camera?!

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Re: Blue Morning

Post by Kyssifur » Wed Feb 15, 2012 10:58 am

I liked it! ^^
we are awesome

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Re: Blue Morning

Post by irriadin » Wed Feb 15, 2012 11:29 am

That girl likes to wrap herself in blankets, doesn't she?

Very unique type of song. I like how your editing style matches the mood well, "light and airy" I'd describe it as. The "counting your change" line accompanied by the visuals didn't really work for me (kinda drew me out of the video), but I thought everything else was great.

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Re: Blue Morning

Post by Cross/fade » Fri Feb 17, 2012 12:54 am

Well done. It was light and cute. I think you could add "character profile" as a category since I believe it works as one.

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Re: Blue Morning

Post by Derisor » Fri Feb 17, 2012 7:18 pm

Nice video, nice atmosphere. The only thing I don't like is the scene at 0:46-0:48, it ruins the romantic mood.

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Re: Blue Morning

Post by Centurione » Sat Feb 18, 2012 7:08 am

Kyssifur wrote:I liked it! ^^
I'm glad, thank you :)
irriadin wrote:That girl likes to wrap herself in blankets, doesn't she?

Very unique type of song. I like how your editing style matches the mood well, "light and airy" I'd describe it as. The "counting your change" line accompanied by the visuals didn't really work for me (kinda drew me out of the video), but I thought everything else was great.
Yup, guess she likes... like I do :roll:
Thank you, really. I know some of the scenes didn't match the mood well. I'll try to avoid it in the future ;)
Cross/fade wrote:Well done. It was light and cute. I think you could add "character profile" as a category since I believe it works as one.
Oops, I thought I marked it, thanks. And thank you very much for your comment, made me happy :D
Derisor wrote:Nice video, nice atmosphere. The only thing I don't like is the scene at 0:46-0:48, it ruins the romantic mood.
Like I wrote above: some scenes don't fit the mood, not only this one. I'll keep that in mind to avoid it next time. Thank you!

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Re: Blue Morning

Post by xDreww » Mon Feb 20, 2012 11:30 am

Pretty cute and chill. Like the raw style going on here. Liked how you matched some scenes with the lyrics of the song, that was a plus.
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Re: Blue Morning

Post by BakaViking » Mon Feb 20, 2012 1:55 pm

Haha, I havn't seen the anime but now I'm really curious. :3
Pretty cute AMV. There was something about the synch during the first 30 secs or so that I didn't quite like. But overall it was sweet. My head is all fluffy now!

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