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- emodude
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- Kalium
- Sir Bugsalot
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What is it with text recently? I've seen more videos abusing text in the last month...
Oh, right. Video.
First, what's with the bars on the top and bottom? For the most part, you don't use them at all. Why not just ditch them entirely?
Second, the text. I see you gave it up maybe halfway through, but before that it was problematic. Text draws the eye very strongly, and thus is very distracting. If the idea was to apply descriptions to Mugen, that's what the video is for. Show, don't tell, especially when the focus is a character like this.
Those aside, this is a good video. It's well timed and technically good. I'm keeping it.
Oh, right. Video.
First, what's with the bars on the top and bottom? For the most part, you don't use them at all. Why not just ditch them entirely?
Second, the text. I see you gave it up maybe halfway through, but before that it was problematic. Text draws the eye very strongly, and thus is very distracting. If the idea was to apply descriptions to Mugen, that's what the video is for. Show, don't tell, especially when the focus is a character like this.
Those aside, this is a good video. It's well timed and technically good. I'm keeping it.
- Reigna
- is actually a penguin in boots
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Text was too fast to really give any sort of impact from :24-:53. Thought you used it better towards the middle though. Like Kalium said, probably could have done away with the bars as well. Other than that, I thought it was a well edited vid. Definitely enjoyed watching this one, and props to you for the choice of music.
Casting white shadows.
- Zero Link
- Joined: Tue Nov 22, 2005 7:12 pm
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Idk, the more I watched it, the more the white boarders grew on to me.NerdStrudel wrote:I'm a sucker for champloo AMVs.
/getz
edit: Good editing, One of the better action champloo amvs i've seen... I really didn't dig the White borders around it the whole time.. I mean, I know the yserved a purpose early on, you used them. Then later on they were just there, and they were kind of eyesores. Still decent amv