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pharaoh
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Post by pharaoh » Sun Aug 31, 2008 12:53 pm

Gidrasan wrote:what's a crazy video... bad effects, bad quality.... 3/10 =\
i liked word crazy but the way you express your thoughts isn't the best
way to encourage someone who's just started like me any way good luck
in your English and thanks

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Post by jtGz » Sun Aug 31, 2008 1:09 pm

pharaoh wrote:
Gidrasan wrote:what's a crazy video... bad effects, bad quality.... 3/10 =\
i liked word crazy but the way you express your thoughts isn't the best
way to encourage someone who's just started like me any way good luck
in your English and thanks
Opinons arent mean to encourage but give honest feedback (though its nice if they do). He said the video have bad quality and bad effects... I understand that much and I think everyone else does, so instead of wishing him 'good luck with his english' try to counter his statement or just acknowlege it. Oh, and on the note 'crazy' in the context of his sentence doesnt mean anything good.

EDIT//

I watched it.

The whole video is made on basic 'Oh what I cool effect! I will add this one... on this too!, oh and this one as well!'. Many first amvs is done with many unfiting effects but You did quite job here. Well, the TVnoises beginning just get in the way. There is no sound or music to it... I dont know why You did this...
Technical its not so bad, there is sync here and there, also most of the time video keeps up with music speed. But next time try more cuts on the video than syncing with effects, especially for long series like Naurto. Dont tell me You didnt have enough footage ;s. Some scenes are too long but You sync them to effects which doesnt much help. This amvs biggest lack is AESTHETICS. Those effects just make amv ugly.

I liked the part with Gaara 'Skin to skin, blood and bone, Your all by yourself but Your not alone...' it really fits his profile ;].

Anyway as You stated You are the beginner so You just learn like everybody who starts. Read some guides from this site and when You will do clip ask someone to betatest it. I will wait for Your next amv so dont let yourself down and work harder on next video. Good luck and have fun ;).
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Post by devilmaykickass » Sun Aug 31, 2008 1:25 pm

I was laughing through nearly all of this video...I don't think I was supposed to be.

I couldn't finish it because toward the end that SHAAAKEEEY SCREENS ARE AWESOME effect was making me nauseous.

And yeah, the quality in the beginning is incredibly bad.

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Post by pharaoh » Sun Aug 31, 2008 4:48 pm

Zero Link wrote:I already told you how I felt about it. You won't get that many positive feed backs with such a combination + bad effects.
ok i will take that in mind like i told you
and I'm not waiting for positive feedbacks only
all i need is something that can be useful :roll:
like you told me back there :amv:

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Post by -MD » Mon Sep 01, 2008 5:18 am

lol hehehe...I'll check it out. I'll comment in a few hours.

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Post by pharaoh » Mon Sep 01, 2008 11:07 am

Opinons arent mean to encourage but give honest feedback (though its nice if they do)
actually opinion sometimes got to have that part like this
I will wait for Your next amv so dont let yourself down and work harder on next video. Good luck and have fun ;)
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so that kind of op make me do my best even if i can't or won't do any thing

i think the point of good luck in your English is so he can actually say something that help me improve and not just making fun of him like you thought
and the word crazy sometimes it fits that kind of fast action amv's

beside the way i used effect wasn't that easy accept the beginning of it
because it was done by ulead so i know it does have the most crappy quality
and the most crappy effects

any way i will read the guides again and see if i missed any thing
and next time you will see something you like

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Post by Zero Link » Mon Sep 01, 2008 12:32 pm

pharaoh wrote:
Zero Link wrote:I already told you how I felt about it. You won't get that many positive feed backs with such a combination + bad effects.
ok i will take that in mind like i told you
and I'm not waiting for positive feedbacks only
all i need is something that can be useful :roll:
like you told me back there :amv:
Hmm, sometimes when people leave negative feedback, that's their way of telling you to fix the parts they find bad.

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Post by pharaoh » Mon Sep 01, 2008 5:39 pm

devilmaykickass wrote:I was laughing through nearly all of this video...I don't think I was supposed to be.

I couldn't finish it because toward the end that SHAAAKEEEY SCREENS ARE AWESOME effect was making me nauseous.

And yeah, the quality in the beginning is incredibly bad.
some parts are actually seems to be funny like about 1:19 until 1:32
if that what you mean

i really don't get the part about the shakes here but
i did when you left an op back there

and sorry about the quality thanks to ulead crashing

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