Just Me [Entry For A-Kon 2009]

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Re: Just Me [Entry For A-Kon 2009]

Post by Darkpwns » Thu Apr 09, 2009 1:49 pm

uhhh...well it was....ok? the masks got repetitive and started to irk me after the 2nd time they popped up. Can't say I really got sentimental from the video but i saw where you tried to incorporate some of that romantic smex powersz. i'm not gonna comment on the winry lip sync ( :nono: ) but if you keep doing these types of videos you'll soon get better so more power to you

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Re: Just Me [Entry For A-Kon 2009]

Post by Bauzi » Thu Apr 09, 2009 2:19 pm

Ok my first impression was like... "So what?" You know those videos that left you behind with a impression of "aha...". It didn´t gave me anything (good or bad). Must be the song or something...

The second time it went better for me. It left some positive impressions.

Things that I like:
I like this kind of your editing more.

Things that I question:
00:46 Why the hell do you show us some dance scenes? I don´t see why they are related to the "theme" of the amv. The same goes for the band scenes.
01:44 Why do you try to mix the animes? I don´t see a reason why you need to build here some sort of connection =/
2:33 why is there a yellow guitar?

Things that I dislike:
Your basic character masks look kinda sloppy to me :( I mean the borders and you use the same masks quite often...
Lipsync... it just doesn´t work with mimik and technic...
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Re: Just Me [Entry For A-Kon 2009]

Post by Koys » Thu Apr 09, 2009 3:47 pm

TwilightChrono wrote:
from some inscrustation crade
Uhhhh......what?

And thanks. I am glad you liked it.
Sorry :P "the inscustations are not always clean"
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Re: Just Me [Entry For A-Kon 2009]

Post by TwilightChrono » Fri Apr 10, 2009 12:25 am

Thanks for the input guys. It was my first attempt of a video like this, so I'm glad it came off as positive to some of you guys. I think it shows how much I have improved. As long as I keep practicing, I think I will get better and put out something really good. XD
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Re: Just Me [Entry For A-Kon 2009]

Post by InsaneWaya » Fri Apr 10, 2009 12:42 am

pretty good, needed work, will op later.
Looking for beta testers!

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Re: Just Me [Entry For A-Kon 2009]

Post by TwilightChrono » Sat Apr 11, 2009 4:15 pm

InsaneWaya wrote:pretty good, needed work, will op later.
Thanks. I appreciate it.
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Re: Just Me [Entry For A-Kon 2009]

Post by InsaneWaya » Sun Apr 12, 2009 12:44 am

TwilightChrono wrote:
InsaneWaya wrote:pretty good, needed work, will op later.
Thanks. I appreciate it.
by later i mean tomorrow or the next day :amv:
Looking for beta testers!

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Re: Just Me [Entry For A-Kon 2009]

Post by TwilightChrono » Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:00 am

Haha, I know. Was just saying thanks in advance XDD
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