Reaching You

[Chiiisus]

Ohai thur Zanetta xD
Tis very Cool maybe even edible >:3
Some parts were a little slow but it was really well done

I feel more drawn to your banner with Kaname on it... just cause Kaname is awesome and better than Zero and nyyaaa i just wanna squidge Kaname. xD

[Distance]

actually to my surprise, I realy liked that. makes me want to go finish the series, I only watched upto around eps 10ish.

good job!

I am glad you liked =) much thanks!

Ohai thur Zanetta xD
Tis very Cool maybe even edible >:3
Some parts were a little slow but it was really well done

I feel more drawn to your banner with Kaname on it... just cause Kaname is awesome and better than Zero and nyyaaa i just wanna squidge Kaname. xD

Thank you xD yay :3 glad chu liked it ^^

PS: Don't eat it xD

[AimoAio]

Seen this before on the tube Love it Pretty goodstuff oji-chan

[Distance]

Seen this before on the tube Love it Pretty goodstuff oji-chan

Yup, thank you Oba-chan X3

[Aggressor]

I like the series much (in fact Tsumura Tokiko is one of my favorite chars ever), but not only you managed to spoil the main plot in your descrition on the site but you'd done it the way I'd never watch the anime after reading it. Try to spend the time improving your vid instead of writing such mood-breaking descriptions.
As for the vid, I wonder what could become of it if you spent more time editing...

[Distance]

I like the series much (in fact Tsumura Tokiko is one of my favorite chars ever), but not only you managed to spoil the main plot in your descrition on the site but you'd done it the way I'd never watch the anime after reading it. Try to spend the time improving your vid instead of writing such mood-breaking descriptions.
As for the vid, I wonder what could become of it if you spent more time editing...

hm I see xD Sorry for breaking your mood then o.o Didn't actually think someone would see it that way ;O
Still thanks for commenting, I will try better next time =)

[Gaurry_no_blond]

not enough dynamics. too "weak" song for action

[Otohiko]

I don't think the song is too weak for action, and I think the editing on the action parts approached what it should be as far as action goes (it was just not always consistent - some good moments in it though).

For me the real problem was that the video was really setting up as a sort of character/romance/action video, but instead ended up as more of an action/character/(romance?) video - I only know this series a little bit, but it seemed like you were setting up to have two connected parts to the video - one about the characters' relationship, the other about their supernatural struggles and such stuff. That's all there, but the action quickly gets random-ish, takes over most of the video and disconnects itself from the character development pretty quickly. A lot of character scenes also border on filler-ish with dramatic-looking faces, and the chemistry needed for it to be a romantic video only pops up in a few scenes. Taken together, the two parts of the video clash and it doesn't leave me with a strong impression or even a mood. Instead the action ends up being a bit of a distraction.

I think your action editing is mostly fine, although I really recommend you vary scenes more and don't get stuck in long stretches of a character fighting the same villain in the same scene.

For a 3-day effort though, this is pretty good for sure. More time and more structure would've helped it.