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0:00 - 0:09: Text was very fitting with the transition cause of the cherry blossoms and with the radial blur.
0:18 - 0:19 I can guess how you did that fade. . . but that was really good! How did you do that?
0:37 Felt like something could be added there to up the beat more. Plus, I think a circle with some feathering during the cross-fade could've helped. A medium zoom-in on the eye then a sharp zoom-out on the card. Riccardocasu did it in his quickening vid so I think it would be useful too know if you try it again.
0:45 - 0:46: Good transition with the radial blur before the zoom out of the eye, but felt a bit to bright and I think a feathered mask could help.
1:31: ...You love that scene... don't you??
1:51: A circle transition with some feathering during the crossfade can work here too. Also, your blur during the crossfade is pretty good.
1:59 - 2:02: No zoom-ins, no fancy effects, just a little color correction, a little outside blur and the internal synching will do the rest. Good choice
2:28 - 2:29: I feel like you should've kept the brightness & contrast going down until the end of the scene.
2:46: Linear wipe plus brightness & contrast on the bottom was good. Definitely note-worthy.
2:54 - 2:56: I see what your doing and I like it, but I guess my eyes felt like that you could've done something to kinda tone down the abruptness not too much but enough to make the transitions just a little bit smoother. Or maybe adding something to make the transitions harsher? I don't know. Something, though, feels like something could be done there.
2:58: Don't stop! xD Keep the brightness & contrast going down until the cross-fade ends.
3:05: good choice.
3:06: Is that transition normal or did you mask that? Either way, good choice.
3:14: Those flowers felt like they came in too abrupt, if there was a slower transition like a linear wipe or circle with feathering, I think it'd make it look a tad better. Unless its part of the scene, then, in which case... F*** the animators
3:15: Can use a little brightness & contrast plus a little radial blur there. I sense it. If not, whatevs.
3:24. Question: How did you do that? The thing with the cards not showing up in the scene but slightly showing up bit by bit?
v.v Only saying this once and I'll never say this again unless you make an even more awesome AMV. . . . This AMV was cooba wooba Malik and me inside my head: "GAYYYYYYYYYY"
0:18 - 0:19 I can guess how you did that fade. . . but that was really good! How did you do that?
0:37 Felt like something could be added there to up the beat more. Plus, I think a circle with some feathering during the cross-fade could've helped. A medium zoom-in on the eye then a sharp zoom-out on the card. Riccardocasu did it in his quickening vid so I think it would be useful too know if you try it again.
0:45 - 0:46: Good transition with the radial blur before the zoom out of the eye, but felt a bit to bright and I think a feathered mask could help.
1:31: ...You love that scene... don't you??
1:51: A circle transition with some feathering during the crossfade can work here too. Also, your blur during the crossfade is pretty good.
1:59 - 2:02: No zoom-ins, no fancy effects, just a little color correction, a little outside blur and the internal synching will do the rest. Good choice
2:28 - 2:29: I feel like you should've kept the brightness & contrast going down until the end of the scene.
2:46: Linear wipe plus brightness & contrast on the bottom was good. Definitely note-worthy.
2:54 - 2:56: I see what your doing and I like it, but I guess my eyes felt like that you could've done something to kinda tone down the abruptness not too much but enough to make the transitions just a little bit smoother. Or maybe adding something to make the transitions harsher? I don't know. Something, though, feels like something could be done there.
2:58: Don't stop! xD Keep the brightness & contrast going down until the cross-fade ends.
3:05: good choice.
3:06: Is that transition normal or did you mask that? Either way, good choice.
3:14: Those flowers felt like they came in too abrupt, if there was a slower transition like a linear wipe or circle with feathering, I think it'd make it look a tad better. Unless its part of the scene, then, in which case... F*** the animators
3:15: Can use a little brightness & contrast plus a little radial blur there. I sense it. If not, whatevs.
3:24. Question: How did you do that? The thing with the cards not showing up in the scene but slightly showing up bit by bit?
v.v Only saying this once and I'll never say this again unless you make an even more awesome AMV. . . . This AMV was cooba wooba Malik and me inside my head: "GAYYYYYYYYYY"
