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Post by iamfanboy » Mon Oct 23, 2006 5:48 pm

Niotex wrote:If one wants some actual feedback from me then shut the fuck up and listen to me. I'm actually anything but a troll. Your little ass wouldn't be able to whip something interesting together. Even if talented people were to feed you the edits. The thing that your lacking is the basic eye for editing/flow/sync/quality. If one dos not show one of these factors in one of their first video's. One should give up trying while they are still ahead. So unless you have something constructive to say or are able to speak on the same level as yours truly, Give up. If you want me to rip your video apart, edit by edit and explaining you what you did wrong. Say so, I'll be happy to tear your little shit ass apart. But don't come back here crying about me bitching your ass into things you are incapable of.
*laughs scornfully*

Having just watched your first video (that you have uploaded), I'm not so sure what you're proud of... it has its timed moments, and good ones, but about a third of it was "toss scene to music" formula with no timing whatsoever - you know what I'm talking about, and you should be ashamed to be calling ME out. You were good when you began, but not much better.

I'll leave a fair critique for it, when I get over being angry at this quick comment:
2006-10-23 09:30:40Give up, go home
Experience counts for more than so-called "beginner's talent", just like any art. The people who work hard, listen to criticism, and improve themselves always end up better than the arrogant fools who say, "You suck and I'm great, and that's the way it's gonna stay."

When I started drawing, I couldn't even draw a hand. When I first started writing, I didn't have a clue what a person really sounded like. When I first started painting, I just kinda gloobbbbed it on. When I first started acting, I was more wooden than a board.

But I learned and got better. Like it or not, so did YOU. Maybe you've had people licking your arse for so long that you've forgotten where you began.
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Post by OtakuForLife » Mon Oct 23, 2006 5:53 pm

wow, guys calm down we're talking about AMVs here..
It's a hobby, everybody starts somewhere and some start
off sucking. Now why don't people take there egos outta this and
walk away. The easiest way to deal with this issue is to just walk
away.. If the the other person is still ranting it shows whos the most
peity. No need for it to become like mothers jokes on a playground..
Speaking this to all involved..

"give peace a chance" :)

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Post by OtakuForLife » Mon Oct 23, 2006 6:03 pm

Oh, and the bicubic errors weren't helpful..

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Post by Inuyasha the 3rd » Mon Oct 23, 2006 6:04 pm

Niotex wrote:
iamfanboy wrote:To 'impress' you? To 'amuse' you? You're nothing to me Niotex; didn't I make that clear in the last thread? The only person's opinion whom I genuinely wanted was pat_hulse's; I got his. He says, "You've improved. Now, do something interesting." Check on that; all I wanted to do with this video was learn the program - which I did in a week's time. What were you doing in a week's time with your video editing software? Clipping the good parts of Swedish horse porn movies out so you don't have to waste time clicking the bar to find the parts that got you off?

And why don't you crawl back to the j00Tube with the other trolls who can only say, "hTis is teh suxxor, go 'way Noob"?
If one wants some actual feedback from me then shut the fuck up and listen to me. I'm actually anything but a troll. Your little ass wouldn't be able to whip something interesting together. Even if talented people were to feed you the edits. The thing that your lacking is the basic eye for editing/flow/sync/quality. If one dos not show one of these factors in one of their first video's. One should give up trying while they are still ahead. So unless you have something constructive to say or are able to speak on the same level as yours truly, Give up. If you want me to rip your video apart, edit by edit and explaining you what you did wrong. Say so, I'll be happy to tear your little shit ass apart. But don't come back here crying about me bitching your ass into things you are incapable of.

In other news: Your even worst then guy07

I'm going to trail off of what Niotex said here: You need to shut up. Your editing needs alot of work, and to be honest, the video was a complete yawnfest. It wasn't even that intresting.

That is all, and GOOD DAY TO YOU SIR.

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Post by Moonie » Mon Oct 23, 2006 6:06 pm

OtakuForLife wrote: No need for it to become like mothers jokes on a playground..

Yo mamas so old when she farts dust comes out of her butt! =)

sorry, i couldn't resist that^^

Yeah, everyone should calm down
and drink some sake!
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Post by Shinodude » Mon Oct 23, 2006 6:07 pm

OtakuForLife wrote:wow, guys calm down we're talking about AMVs here..
It's a hobby, everybody starts somewhere and some start
off sucking. Now why don't people take there egos outta this and
walk away. The easiest way to deal with this issue is to just walk
away.. If the the other person is still ranting it shows whos the most
peity. No need for it to become like mothers jokes on a playground..
Speaking this to all involved..

"give peace a chance" :)
what you talking about? true men solve the words by bashing the others brain out. :lol:
iamfanboy wrote:Having just watched your first video (that you have uploaded), I'm not so sure what you're proud of... it has its timed moments, and good ones, but about a third of it was "toss scene to music" formula with no timing whatsoever - you know what I'm talking about, and you should be ashamed to be calling ME out. You were good when you began, but not much better.
the diffrence is that you made an as out of yourself when you announced your video most smart people the people that get advise to help them improve faster are the people who make there first video ask for help in a polite manner.

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Post by Prodigi » Mon Oct 23, 2006 6:07 pm

M-M-M-M-M-MONSTER FAIL.

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Post by Moonie » Mon Oct 23, 2006 6:12 pm

I got another one!


Yo mama so old she knew Burger King while he was still a prince.
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Post by Niotex » Mon Oct 23, 2006 6:13 pm

Did I say I was mister perfect then? Hell no little kid. But if your calling me on this one then be sure to put your money where your mouth is. As I never implied this criteria on myself now did I? This being said I decline being all high and mighty. Thus therefor you basically don't have jack on my ass. Now if you are willing to continue this discussion as to why you suck. I'd suggest you contact me off boards since these is most likely going to get locked up if we continue like this. And mind you I'd love to continue this little bashing parade as long as I can. So please, Feel free to contact me.

One can find all my contact info in the forum buttons ofcource. So ones more, feel free to spam. ;)

As for the QC. Think I give a damn about that? Try again kid.
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Post by Moonie » Mon Oct 23, 2006 6:15 pm

One more!

Yo mama so hairy you almost died of rugburn at birth!


Okay im done now...
I'll check out your video and tell you what i think about it.
It couldn't be that bad could it?
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