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Post by kickass331 » Tue Jul 17, 2007 8:06 pm

VEGETA_LSSJ wrote:Serbian... :cry: :D
If it is easier for you Yugoslavia is past name for Serbia...
What? They renamed Yugoslavia?? When????
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Post by VEGETA_LSSJ » Tue Jul 17, 2007 8:12 pm

kickass331 wrote:
VEGETA_LSSJ wrote:Serbian... :cry: :D
If it is easier for you Yugoslavia is past name for Serbia...
What? They renamed Yugoslavia?? When????
Hmmm goddamn! I dont know for sure :D I think is half of year or one year... Serbia and Montenegro was Yugoslavia and then they separated and now is only Serbia...I am born in Serbia and I live in Serbia but I am Montenegrian...

BTW almost forgot, I am such an idiot! - thank you for
the video looked great and sounded great
and for downloading and for watching it.
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Post by kickass331 » Tue Jul 17, 2007 8:26 pm

VEGETA_LSSJ wrote:
kickass331 wrote:
VEGETA_LSSJ wrote:Serbian... :cry: :D
If it is easier for you Yugoslavia is past name for Serbia...
What? They renamed Yugoslavia?? When????
Hmmm goddamn! I dont know for sure :D I think is half of year or one year... Serbia and Montenegro was Yugoslavia and then they separated and now is only Serbia...I am born in Serbia and I live in Serbia but I am Montenegrian...

BTW almost forgot, I am such an idiot! - thank you for
the video looked great and sounded great
and for downloading and for watching it.
Yeah that's really complicated, and you're welcome... I never really got into DBZ, but that's because I was watching it back on the old weekdays toonami before miguzi and they stopped showing it and I stopped watching it... It was many years ago... :/
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Post by VEGETA_LSSJ » Tue Jul 17, 2007 8:29 pm

That is bad...try to watch it again, from beginning to the end, with movies and specials you may not regret it, especially if you liked that what you saw in old days.... :D
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Post by Zero Link » Tue Jul 17, 2007 8:30 pm

Tis better be good. Someone told me about it and said it was so.. Im dling it -_- Will edit when i finish watching.
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Post by VEGETA_LSSJ » Tue Jul 17, 2007 8:33 pm

Thank you! I hope you'll not regret it! ^_^
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Post by Zero Link » Tue Jul 17, 2007 8:43 pm

Its pretty unique. Pretty good quality and Its dedicated to Vegeta. But the timing could be better and some of the effects were meh. But still, i like it. I'll give you an op.
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Post by VEGETA_LSSJ » Tue Jul 17, 2007 8:54 pm

Thank you very much
And thank you for opinion too :D
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Post by The Origonal Head Hunter » Tue Jul 17, 2007 10:39 pm

the opinion I have left states my thoughts. :up:
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Post by macguy » Wed Jul 18, 2007 12:12 am

VEGETA_LSSJ wrote:Thank you for comment.
No problem and as for the rating, I would give the video a 6/10. Sorry if this may offend you, the 6 is mostly for the action and some cool effects, video quality, sound quality. -4 is for too many digital effects, random fight scenes and a non-clear story-line. The ending was just awesome!
Actually he does tell the storry, this AMV is only about VEGETA, those scnes with someone other are just there to show that he fought very much...
Not really a story per se but just about Vegeta falling and fighting while claiming not to be able to be beaten.


Ineteresting thing is that one guy told me absolutelly oposite of what you said, he said that this is not just one more action AMV but this is in the same time action and life-telling AMV. I respect your opinion of course, and I understand that in your eyes that is only bunch of random scenes, but trust me, I really watched for EVERY SINGLE FRAME to fit SCENE SYNC, TEXT SYNC, LIP SYNC, and to add some effects but not to overdo it...
Here is why I think it isn't clear. You merely start the video with fighting as I said before which immediately doesn't explain what Vegeta was fighting for. Simply put, you didn't need that first fighting scene in the slightest. Now if you just added that part, everything else would fit much better but that just made it look like an action video which you seem to have admitted. The scene sync and lyric sync (not text) with the auto destruction is good although I still dislike all the scenes just flashing on my face.

You over did it with the transitions and the scene with lots of boxes. That alone was just confusing me. I personally don't like the song (lyrics are good though) much but that's not of any importance just to be honest. Besides, who didn't Vegeta need?
Like I said it is not timelinely good but it should not be, because chorus repeates, and song is not so textually rich to do a timelinely sync. AND because he is talking about his life IN GLOBAL not timelinely...He is THE ONE who chose a random scenes of his life not me :D :D :D

Never said had to be in a timeline but it should've been more organized. The problem for me is you did too many random scenes of his life (not Vegeta). Adding scenes from his past is fine (globally speaking) but you should also retain some continuity. For example, you could start with Vegeta's ultimate goal and that is to defeat Goku for what he's been through. Of course first add that talking scene to make it better... This way, people will understand who Vegeta claims to not need! This would make perfect sense as to what he's fighting for and then adding the touch of his past is great!

However, you didn't retain much continuity at all and just focused on Vegeta's power with him claiming not to be able to be beaten. That is what I call an action sync for the most part.
Anyway I am actually happy that you respect me enough to download my AMV and watch it, and thank you for that, there is always place for comments and critics.
Hehe well again don't get the impression that I didn't like it as the AMV had it's moments.
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