FOTOGRAFIA LA SOLEDAD "CodeMoonie//PROJECT"

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Re: My last AMV "CodeMoonie//PROJECT"

Post by Niotex » Tue Dec 02, 2008 4:07 pm

Video felt WAAY too rough around the edges if you get my drift. So in the end I didn't care for it all too much. I'd probably have a better understanding of the video beyond the compositing if I could understand the lyrics. Either way it just didn't cut it for me.

6.4/10

//EDIT//
Jay I love your douche bag ways of correcting me =3

So I actually grabbed the subbed version and I know that Jay pushed for that last minute. First off I'd like to say that yes the video does make allot more sense now. But I also find that certain elements are too literal. But this is something thats overall hard to get around. The subbed version although last minute does raise a few new questions. For starters I have no idea as to why you insist on letter boxing this version. The subs can easily be placed in the bottom of the 16:9 version without being an eyesore. The font used for the subs is disgustingly bland and well.. standard. Considering the rest of the video is put in a somewhat stylized setting. I would have liked to see you do something with the subs as well. I would be pushing it here but Karaoke with top original lyrics and bottom English wouldn't be too bad. The lack of karaoke is of course understandable and easily forgivable. However the biggest problem with the subs yet is the awkward placing. I would highly recommend centering it up next time.

Something to keep in mind for your next video is perhaps soft subbing it from the get go. This way if people feel the need they can just turn on/off the subs at will. Considering you're not doing any complex subbing srt subs muxed into a mp4 would be more then enough.

Blame Jay for my extended "bitching". If its any constellation I've updated my score.

6.8/10
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Re: My last AMV "CodeMoonie//PROJECT"

Post by Koopiskeva » Tue Dec 02, 2008 4:13 pm

Niotex wrote:Video felt WAAY too rough around the edges if you get my drift. So in the end I didn't care for it all too much. I'd probably have a better understanding of the video beyond the compositing if I could understand the lyrics. Either way it just didn't cut it for me.

6.4/10
There's a subtitled version on an indirect link - also, the translation is on the video page (by me). Way2go NOOB.

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Gay-o-tex wrote:If it's any 'consolation' I've updated my score.
Fix't

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Re: My last AMV "CodeMoonie//PROJECT"

Post by Niotex » Tue Dec 02, 2008 4:14 pm

I love you too Jay ;P

/gets softsub

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Up we go :amv:
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Re: My last AMV "CodeMoonie//PROJECT"

Post by piiiiii » Tue Dec 02, 2008 7:46 pm

The end comes too quickly, because it's was excellent :cry: . Really good intro. :up:

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Re: My last AMV "CodeMoonie//PROJECT"

Post by Megamom » Tue Dec 02, 2008 9:34 pm

Niotex wrote:Something to keep in mind for your next video is perhaps soft subbing it from the get go. This way if people feel the need they can just turn on/off the subs at will. Considering you're not doing any complex subbing srt subs muxed into a mp4 would be more then enough.
:wink: Gracias... I will try!
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Re: My last AMV "CodeMoonie//PROJECT"

Post by Moonie » Tue Dec 02, 2008 9:39 pm

Awesomeness!
I think the live action/anime mixing is very well done
and the song is great too. :)
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Re: My last AMV "CodeMoonie//PROJECT"

Post by Megamom » Wed Dec 03, 2008 9:29 am

Moonie wrote:Awesomeness!
I think the live action/anime mixing is very well done
and the song is great too. :)
:o Moonie thank you very much ... I'm very happy, because you liked my video!
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Re: My last AMV "CodeMoonie//PROJECT"

Post by Mol » Wed Dec 03, 2008 10:20 am

oh shi :o :shock:
i really like it :up:
the way you mixed it is pretty good :up:
Still better than that MMO.
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Re: My last AMV "CodeMoonie//PROJECT"

Post by zoamarta » Thu Dec 04, 2008 2:48 am

Mi amado amigo caballeroooooo!!muaaaaaaaaaa!!
Empezemos por puntos ^^...las escenas fusionadas con video real,excelentes!!el tedioso trabajo de aislar a los personajes muy preciso y muy convincente!!otro punto excelente!!cambios de escenas muy bien sincronizadas,con sus efectos correspondientes y mas que apropiados,sumale otro punto excelente!!
Es un Amv muy original en todos los aspectos,con sus detalles mucho mas que cuidadosos,como tu solo lo sabes hacer querido mio!!asombrada siempre me dejas con todo lo que haces,ya lo sabes bien de sobras...,y tu genialidad y maestria nunca nadie puede dar lugar a dudarlo,porque tu lo exprimes de tal forma que nos dejas siempre atonitos a todos que admiramos tus obras.
Puntos negativos en el video?acaso como fué que aprendiste?pues con los errores que tu bien sabes subsanar!!asi que...ninguno!!

Un beso muy grande y recibe otro abrazo de tu querida zoa.
Felicidades por otro gran trabajo!! :up:

PD:Sorry it do not speak English u.u

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Re: My last AMV "CodeMoonie//PROJECT"

Post by Nya-chan Production » Thu Dec 04, 2008 6:03 am

zoamarta wrote:Mi amado amigo caballeroooooo!!muaaaaaaaaaa!!
Empezemos por puntos ^^...las escenas fusionadas con video real,excelentes!!el tedioso trabajo de aislar a los personajes muy preciso y muy convincente!!otro punto excelente!!cambios de escenas muy bien sincronizadas,con sus efectos correspondientes y mas que apropiados,sumale otro punto excelente!!
Es un Amv muy original en todos los aspectos,con sus detalles mucho mas que cuidadosos,como tu solo lo sabes hacer querido mio!!asombrada siempre me dejas con todo lo que haces,ya lo sabes bien de sobras...,y tu genialidad y maestria nunca nadie puede dar lugar a dudarlo,porque tu lo exprimes de tal forma que nos dejas siempre atonitos a todos que admiramos tus obras.
Puntos negativos en el video?acaso como fué que aprendiste?pues con los errores que tu bien sabes subsanar!!asi que...ninguno!!

Un beso muy grande y recibe otro abrazo de tu querida zoa.
Felicidades por otro gran trabajo!! :up:

PD:Sorry it do not speak English u.u
How dare you shout nasty words at Megamom? :nono:

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