[Akross-Con 2010] BLEACH! [DZ-Studios]

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Re: [Akross-Con 2010] BLEACH! [DZ-Studios]

Post by NS » Thu Dec 16, 2010 11:06 pm

I just didn't understand him hating on the type of transitions you use, mainly because his only gripe makes him a hypocrite. Of course he's entitled to his own opinion, I'm just pointing out how I read it :D.

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Re: [Akross-Con 2010] BLEACH! [DZ-Studios]

Post by -Reda- » Thu Dec 16, 2010 11:31 pm

NS wrote:I just didn't understand him hating on the type of transitions you use, mainly because his only gripe makes him a hypocrite. Of course he's entitled to his own opinion, I'm just pointing out how I read it :D.
"BUT YOU DO IT TOO!" isn't a solid argument. Just putting that out there.

I can kind of see what Soup is talking about, but other than pretend to be Godix or just yell random shit, I would say the best way to fix it would be to ease up on your blurs just slightly. Theres three spots where your line-ups didn't seem spot on, and that would be at :27, :33,and 1:33. Honestly you could fix those if you just spent a little more time on them cleaning them up. There's good and then there's perfect, try to lean more towards perfect. Although, as I said earlier, its more than likely a problem that could be fixed by simply reducing the amount of motion blur to make the transition itself less noticeable, but still maintain the shift in motion (if that makes sense).

Your scratches also need a lot of work.

And I didn't care for the fade into your name at the end, I'd be much more a fan of seeing an old school "TV Shutting Off" visual effect for that final sound. That's just a personal thing though, I despise credits that are a part of the actual video like that.
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Only took me 3 posts to finally say what I thought of the video, a new record.
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Re: [Akross-Con 2010] BLEACH! [DZ-Studios]

Post by AaronAMV » Fri Dec 17, 2010 12:14 am

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Re: [Akross-Con 2010] BLEACH! [DZ-Studios]

Post by Orestes » Fri Dec 17, 2010 12:20 am

Aaron get your gangsterism outta dis shit brah, only srs people here.
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Re: [Akross-Con 2010] BLEACH! [DZ-Studios]

Post by LopezAMV » Fri Dec 17, 2010 12:14 pm

Nice vid Gote :)

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Re: [Akross-Con 2010] BLEACH! [DZ-Studios]

Post by Kaream » Sat Dec 18, 2010 3:14 am

AaronAMV wrote:thug lyfe
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Re: [Akross-Con 2010] BLEACH! [DZ-Studios]

Post by gotegenks » Sun Dec 19, 2010 3:35 pm

-Reda- wrote: I can kind of see what Soup is talking about, but other than pretend to be Godix or just yell random shit-(<3)-

I would say the best way to fix it would be to ease up on your blurs just slightly. Theres three spots where your line-ups didn't seem spot on, and that would be at :27, :33,and 1:33. Honestly you could fix those if you just spent a little more time on them cleaning them up. There's good and then there's perfect, try to lean more towards perfect. Although, as I said earlier, its more than likely a problem that could be fixed by simply reducing the amount of motion blur to make the transition itself less noticeable, but still maintain the shift in motion (if that makes sense).

Your scratches also need a lot of work.

And I didn't care for the fade into your name at the end, I'd be much more a fan of seeing an old school "TV Shutting Off" visual effect for that final sound. That's just a personal thing though, I despise credits that are a part of the actual video like that.
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Only took me 3 posts to finally say what I thought of the video, a new record.
thanks man, if i didn't have a deadline I probably could've fixed a ton. i guess that's what i get for rushing a vid for something i knew i couldn't win...

i thought about that for the ending, but i have no foundation with fx like that so it would've taken me a bit to learn how and i didn't feel like it was worth it

and thanks lopez, but I really wish you wouldn't have edited your post :(
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Re: [Akross-Con 2010] BLEACH! [DZ-Studios]

Post by Neverend » Sun Dec 19, 2010 4:18 pm

I liked it!

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Re: [Akross-Con 2010] BLEACH! [DZ-Studios]

Post by Pie Row Maniac » Mon Dec 20, 2010 5:49 am

God DAMN that was tightly edited |:> Several internets to you, sir :up:

Still... video > banners :awesome:
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Re: [Akross-Con 2010] BLEACH! [DZ-Studios]

Post by Unlimited Rice » Mon Dec 20, 2010 8:17 pm

I had a feeling someone would do this anime/song combo, but I've never heard this version of Bleach before. It's dope!

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