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Luke0zZz
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Post by Luke0zZz » Thu Aug 05, 2010 5:39 pm


YAY! My second full amv!
So.. The concept is simple, I tried to show an infamous city (like the one I live in :D) seen by the eyes of two guys, Kuro and Shiro.. So yeah.. Sorry for my bad english D:

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Re: Cigarette Smokers

Post by LLight » Thu Aug 05, 2010 5:51 pm

I liked it, I think is a good video but your other tekkonkinkreet video was better, maybe cause I liked more the emotions xD
anyway, great job :)

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Re: Cigarette Smokers

Post by irriadin » Thu Aug 05, 2010 7:00 pm

Surprisingly good for a second amv! The one thing that I noticed about it is that you synced almost everything to the drums, and used fades primarily each time. This got repetitive quickly and made me lose interest. Scene selection seemed good though, and you paid attention to the song dynamics. The song itself was decent, it didn't amaze me or anything, but it also wasn't bad at all.

Good job!

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Re: Cigarette Smokers

Post by Luke0zZz » Fri Aug 06, 2010 5:09 am

Thanks! :D

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Re: Cigarette Smokers

Post by NemeRox » Fri Aug 06, 2010 4:20 pm

Kulo and Shilo, Arctic Monkeys, ohyess.

I really think that this is amazing, loved the effects, and also the overlays were really good, even if in some part, they were too confusing imo.
Also have to say that there are some parts, where your effort seems to drop, even thought the end was really cool.
Overall I'll give it a 4.5/5 <3

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Re: Cigarette Smokers

Post by Luke0zZz » Fri Aug 06, 2010 6:25 pm

NemeRox wrote:Kulo and Shilo, Arctic Monkeys, ohyess.

I really think that this is amazing, loved the effects, and also the overlays were really good, even if in some part, they were too confusing imo.
Also have to say that there are some parts, where your effort seems to drop, even thought the end was really cool.
Overall I'll give it a 4.5/5 <3
Thank you neme <3

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