[Full Metal Alchemist] Witchcraft AMV

[tonipl]

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Hi all, this is my first amv and I would like to share with this community, beacouse of your experience on this kind of stuff. The amv consists of two main features, the first is that the lyrics of the song goes along with the images, and second, faced the 7 deadly sins with the 7 human virtues of the characters in the series.
I hope that you give your opinion and ideas about what do you like an what you dont, that will help me to beat my self, because this is not the last amv I'll do, thanks for watching.

I hope you liked it.

(sorry if my english is not that good)

Z.

[Ikore]

as a FMA adict I must admit this is the first amv I watch and last more than 15 seconds to make me thought "it sucks", actually I like a lot of stuff here

1-use this:

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[vidid]178596[/vidid]

2- the 7 Heavenly virtues are Chastity(you could make a really good joke with this one), Temperance, Charity, Diligence, Patience, Kindness, and Humility
3- f*ck tbs and Z simbol! , visual garbage , useless, distracting ¬¬
3-problems with Aspect Ratio, those black borders are not supposed to be there
4-nice alchemy symbol, good font problems with motion: quick movement, then a scene totally static, kills the flow.
5-same formula than all FMA amv: elric brothers lost their mom>> srew it up>> RANDOM! >>> ??? >> Profit!


I guess I overtake with bad critic , but I love this anime, in general is cool, for the first amv exposed, keepitup

[tonipl]

Thank u very much Ikore, all those are very useful critics for me, im working now on my new amv, and let me tell what are my problems here, maybe u can help me a little bit.

- I fixed video link thx
- i never knew about the 7 heveanly virtues, i based myself on the bushido code, but yours are good too.
- Thanks for the Z symbol, ill remove it on the next amv, i was just trying to hide the tbs logo, but i see now it was useful.
- Ok, i know that aspect ratio is not the intended to be, but i was unnable to get the anime material without subs, its dificult to me to find the raw, maybe u can give me some tip here
- Ill try to make my next animations more dynamic.
- Yes ur right, its the same as always, but for my first amv i didnt risk about the inside story too much, ill try harder for my next one.

Thank very much, i will be waiting for u in my next post Ikore, c u around.

Z.

[Ikore]

- Yes ur right, its the same as always, but for my first amv i didnt risk about the inside story too much, ill try harder for my next one.

so cool, with this concept you could have make a really powerfull amv, ps. I´ll lend you a hand, check pm

[tonipl]

thanks ikore, chek ur pm, i have some questions for u