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Ragged Soul

Post by 5c0rp10n » Sat Mar 19, 2011 3:17 pm

Hi all, this is My first amv contest...
P.S. Special thx to KalugaGhost)
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Re: Ragged Soul

Post by SeNniN » Sun Mar 20, 2011 2:04 am

hmm.. this is definitely some interesting work here. But there were few parts that looked a bid strange, and the cut at 136 was ermm.. not so great.
The whole time I was watching this, I was wondering how it would have been great if you had made the colors a bit dark to create a weird creepy atmosphere, which would have worked great with this song and source. It's good, nevertheless, I did enjoy it, but the cut was disappointing just.. :nono: :>
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Re: Ragged Soul

Post by AimoAio » Mon Mar 21, 2011 11:06 am

Loved the mood in this, it actually gave me the chills. :up:

Keep up the good work! ^^

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Re: Ragged Soul

Post by S.A. Robert » Mon Mar 21, 2011 1:17 pm

very good :up:
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Re: Ragged Soul

Post by MagiTabby » Mon Mar 21, 2011 3:13 pm

I have to agree with Sennin on that one cut, it was very abrupt, but I have to say I enjoyed the rest of the video a lot. The flow was really great (which is probably why that one cut stands out so much) and the mood you created was so delicously fitting to both song and footage. My favorite part is close to the beginning as Mikiya moves around Shiki's apartment, yet Shiki herself doesn't move.
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Re: Ragged Soul

Post by TritioAFB » Mon Mar 21, 2011 10:25 pm

fantastic! Very good start
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Re: Ragged Soul

Post by Kireblue » Tue Mar 22, 2011 2:55 pm

I really like the pace of this video and the way that you edited it. I'll have to agree that some parts seemed a little strange, but I still liked this video overall.

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