Step by Step (SHINE)

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Step by Step (SHINE)

Post by Shine_Star » Mon Apr 18, 2011 5:26 pm

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Ok I wasn't expecting so much different opinions but I'm happy that it did... First of all I did this in 3 days at night after my work as fast as I could to participate in a contest so its not perfect.This is not an romantic video..its an happy video...that you are listening in the radio of the car. That was the concept.
After I finished I thought that it didn't work as well as it could and maybe a little awkward as many people say it, and I asked for opinion to several people, but of course I wouldn't start from the zero...I just make some adjustments, and work with what I had.
Thanks for the comments =)!!!

Special thanks to Koopiskeva and Brad that help me to improve it =) !

Enjoy it!
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Re: Step by Step (SHINE)

Post by Kireblue » Mon Apr 18, 2011 5:33 pm

some of the scenes seem a little too random and kinda goes against the theme, but overall, this was a good watch.

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Re: Step by Step (SHINE)

Post by Shine_Star » Tue Apr 19, 2011 10:49 am

kireblue wrote:some of the scenes seem a little too random and kinda goes against the theme, but overall, this was a good watch.
I know what you mean....but that was the intention =)! Thanks :up:

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Re: Step by Step (SHINE)

Post by Statz » Tue Apr 19, 2011 10:58 am

awesome sync!
awesome graphics!
awesome!
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Re: Step by Step (SHINE)

Post by CodeZTM » Tue Apr 19, 2011 11:35 am

It was visually enjoyable to watch and had a nice beat/flow to it. It was almost conceptually empty, but it still had the same enjoyment that multi-source AMVs give me in that I could just have pure visual pleasure. I didn't understand why FMA was in that batch, since its animation really clashed pretty heavily against the rest of the scenes, and the text was pretty weird looking in terms of font.

But overall, I had a nice viewing out of it. I do wish it'd been more romance centered, and it might have done it a little more justice than some of the more random scenes later on.

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Re: Step by Step (SHINE)

Post by Kawatta-kun » Wed Apr 20, 2011 8:10 am

This is win :3
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Re: Step by Step (SHINE)

Post by MimS » Wed Apr 20, 2011 1:26 pm

Refreshing
Good scene choice excepted for some action scenes at the end

I like it :up:
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Re: Step by Step (SHINE)

Post by Radical_Yue » Wed Apr 20, 2011 2:46 pm

Not a fan. Ranom pretty scenes + *insert song here* = very meh. :down:

Would've been better if you would've stuck with the romance/characters who don't have perfect relationships theme that, it appeared, you had going at the beginning with Girl Who Leapt Through Time. It looked like you started with a cute idea and just said "fuck it, these scenes of Misuzu running through fields and having her arms stretched out while she's all alone are pretty and I want to use them damn it." and just stuck with that for the rest of the video :/

I has a sad.

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Re: Step by Step (SHINE)

Post by Doidao_! » Thu Apr 21, 2011 2:14 am

Ohh.. I luv happy AMV's! x]
Overall was nice, some scenes were random, but most of them were not. I've already watched AMVs that didn't have any scene that made sense with the song, that's what I call random!
I think the scenes just start to get a little random in the end of the vid, but It makes sense to put random scenes, as the song repeats its refrain all the time in the end hahah... It was cool! 4/5 :3
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Re: Step by Step (SHINE)

Post by Kyssifur » Thu Apr 21, 2011 4:16 am

This is good! 5/5 You made my day! :)
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