IC - Simulation

[lloyd9988]

Here's a vid I did in 8 hours.

Here was my opponent, Starlocket:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=211lOsrgArM

Advice on what I can change up in the future would be appreciated :3

[ibabrak]

I enjoyed your video as well as you opponent's
As for the advise, maybe work on some of the transitions and shorten the 50% transperency scenes

[Gito]

I think both were good, but I can see where ibabrak is coming from as well. The only other thing that stood out to me is that your opponent's video seemed to have a more defined flow than yours and it made it a little more enjoyable to watch. Despite not being familiar with any of the footage presented in either video, I felt I was able to keep up with Starlocket's just a little more than yours. Maybe try keeping that in mind? Not sure if that helps or not Lol, I'm not saying I could do any better, I'm too green Good job! Keep it up!

EternalSamurai (Gito)

[lloyd9988]

I enjoyed your video as well as you opponent's
As for the advise, maybe work on some of the transitions and shorten the 50% transperency scenes

I think both were good, but I can see where ibabrak is coming from as well. The only other thing that stood out to me is that your opponent's video seemed to have a more defined flow than yours and it made it a little more enjoyable to watch. Despite not being familiar with any of the footage presented in either video, I felt I was able to keep up with Starlocket's just a little more than yours. Maybe try keeping that in mind? Not sure if that helps or not Lol, I'm not saying I could do any better, I'm too green Good job! Keep it up!

EternalSamurai (Gito)

Thanks guys! Yeah, I need a lot more work with flow and quality (Back to ze drawing board) xD Thanks again for your opinions!

[Hikado95]

for an IC of 3 hours is not anything bad, but I would have liked if you'd used curved color

[EllipseIris]

that was cool for 3 hours, your editing is nice, but the video looked a bit off colour, use more contrast and it will look 5x better!