Your Lie in April - Will You Wait?

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Your Lie in April - Will You Wait?

Post by Kiszoki » Mon Jun 08, 2015 12:19 pm



Exams are very soon so in the spirit of procrastination I thought I'd have another go at AMV making! I'm still new to editing so any feedback/tips are appreciated!

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Re: Your Lie in April - Will You Wait?

Post by Kireblue » Tue Jun 09, 2015 11:26 am

Not bad. The editing was pretty clean, and the mood and pace were good :up: It does feel like your video did a little too much jumping around back and forth though. I think that making it slightly more liner and showing a sequential progression of their relationship and her illness would have helped. But like I said, it was still nice overall.

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